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Creation's curse

A poem

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Comment from lyenochka
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Isaiah was such a poet in addition to being a prophet. I always felt sorry for Isaiah and Ezekiel in all that they were called to do. Thanks for sharing about their trials and their walk of faith.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2024

Comment from ESOSTINE
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The poem revealed the limited wisdom of man for choosing to warship God's own creatures when those creature as seen in nature are clapping and praising God always. I find this striking, 'I look amazed, God gave me sight, to see the dawn, released from night.' Well done, dear Roy. Remain blessed.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2024

Comment from DonandVicki
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A poem that caught my attention, My wife and I are reading the Bible for the fifth time and we are now in the book of Isaiah chapter 17. A rhyming poetic joy.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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We fall so short of what we deserve from God. Yet, He continually loves us and remains there for us. We just need to allow Him to work within us. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
    Thanks Barbara, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Your poem captures so much of Scripture, plus a bit of biblical history. I like the two stanzas that reflect the verses in Romans 1, about worshiping creation rather than the Creator. One suggestion: ' within (;) (they) turn what's holy into sin' -- to clarify that it's not God who made the change. Great poem with good rhymes and meter. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
    Thanks Carol , for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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God sees us stumble and fall. He listens as we curse our circumstances and yet He still helps us up, wipes our tears and loves us. Are we worthy? Not really, except to Him. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
    Thanks Gretchen, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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It seems to me the curse in creation is what man contributed with his own hand. Billy Graham once said we give the Devil too much credit. He said we are very capable of doing the wrong thing with no help or encouragement.

Robert

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
    Thanks Robert for these sage comments and clever thoughts, blessings Roy
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 18-Oct-2024
    You're welcome.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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another Christian theme poem expressing your views on creation and mankind worshiping nature rather than worshiping God's creation which is all around them.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
    Thanks Jake, for these sage comments and clever thoughts, blessings Roy
Comment from Samantha Wymer
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These poem verses have come to pass just as the word of God has said. The poem helps me understand the verses better, and I thank you for that. It's hard for me understand everything the good books say. Great poem.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
    Thanks Sam, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Beautiful poem that highlights the majesty of the Grand Creator. Yet so many worship His creation and idols made by their own hands, rather than Him. Even today we continue to see this.
Thank you for sharingcthiscpiwerful message.

RJ

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
    Thanks RJ, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy