Tempus Fugit
Tempus Fugit (Time is fleeting)30 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
She looks tired, I think; weather-worn, but, a lovely face - timeless!
Neat poem; though, the older one gets, the faster time seems to go. Seems like a moment!
Congratulations on All Time Best!
Katharine
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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She looks tired, I think; weather-worn, but, a lovely face - timeless!
Neat poem; though, the older one gets, the faster time seems to go. Seems like a moment!
Congratulations on All Time Best!
Katharine
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for reviewing my "Dead" poem, you are very generous.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Don&Vicki
These twenty syllables remind us how short life can be. Although some think it will last forever.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Hi Don&Vicki
These twenty syllables remind us how short life can be. Although some think it will last forever.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much Joan for the kind review and words.
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You are most kindly welcome, D&V on both counts.
Joan
Comment from Carol Clark2
An interesting thought in your twenty syllables for the contest. You have all three tenses in there, and with the pendulum swinging, it does seem like there's just but moment to do anything. Congratulations! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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An interesting thought in your twenty syllables for the contest. You have all three tenses in there, and with the pendulum swinging, it does seem like there's just but moment to do anything. Congratulations! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much Carol.
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You're welcome. I'm glad this placed in the contest. Nicely written!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful evaluation of where we are and how to view our time here... riding the waves of time as we march on! ;) Well done and well presented!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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A beautiful evaluation of where we are and how to view our time here... riding the waves of time as we march on! ;) Well done and well presented!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is so true. The pendulum swings to the future the present becomes the past we only have a moment. I love the philosophy of this poem. The statue you use for this presentation is cleverly disguised as the Statue of Liberty.
Thanks for telling it like it is and forgoing the platitudes of the political mumbo jumbo.
Jesse
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This is so true. The pendulum swings to the future the present becomes the past we only have a moment. I love the philosophy of this poem. The statue you use for this presentation is cleverly disguised as the Statue of Liberty.
Thanks for telling it like it is and forgoing the platitudes of the political mumbo jumbo.
Jesse
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for the generous review.
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You're welcome, Don and Vicki.
Enjoy the rest of the weekend.
Jesse
Comment from ESOSTINE
This is very true as time seems to fly faster than light. Procrastination is a deadly disease that shifts todays mild pain to tomorrow's mournful regrets. Well done, dear Donald. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This is very true as time seems to fly faster than light. Procrastination is a deadly disease that shifts todays mild pain to tomorrow's mournful regrets. Well done, dear Donald. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for the generous review.
Comment from Wendy G
Perfectly expressed, and insightful words. An excellent choice of bothimage and title. You succinct entry prompts thought in the reader. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Perfectly expressed, and insightful words. An excellent choice of bothimage and title. You succinct entry prompts thought in the reader. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Your review is very kind.
Comment from judiverse
This is a sad write, as times goes so quickly, and our time runs out. Young people think they have all the time in the world, but the pendulum is swinging toward the future, as you write, and it's upon us before we realize it. To me, a week goes by so quickly now, and it used to drag out. Beautiful wording and smooth flow. Best of luck in the future. judi
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This is a sad write, as times goes so quickly, and our time runs out. Young people think they have all the time in the world, but the pendulum is swinging toward the future, as you write, and it's upon us before we realize it. To me, a week goes by so quickly now, and it used to drag out. Beautiful wording and smooth flow. Best of luck in the future. judi
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Nicki.B
I really love that! 'We have but a moment' that's so beautiful. It's such a wonderful poem 20 syllables that you had you used perfectly. An important message within, a reminder that every moment is precious, don't hold onto the past and look forward to the future. Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I really love that! 'We have but a moment' that's so beautiful. It's such a wonderful poem 20 syllables that you had you used perfectly. An important message within, a reminder that every moment is precious, don't hold onto the past and look forward to the future. Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thank you nicki for the generous review. You are very kind. Don
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
Correct syllable count...
This poem says so much. Yes, time is fleeting; if one is in a good place in life, time goes much too fast.
If times are bad, it seems as though time is painfully slow.
I love the photo which complements your excellent poem well.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Author,
Correct syllable count...
This poem says so much. Yes, time is fleeting; if one is in a good place in life, time goes much too fast.
If times are bad, it seems as though time is painfully slow.
I love the photo which complements your excellent poem well.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for the kind review.