Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Chapter 22 A"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a great accomplishment--all those girls safe and out of the clutches of those evil men. It makes you wonder how many in real life have not been saved. If only something could be done about that. It breaks my heart. If my granddaughters were ever taken, I would take up arms and make the men suffer ... bad! Okay, waiting for the next part, Barbara. I guess this novel is almost finished. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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That was a great accomplishment--all those girls safe and out of the clutches of those evil men. It makes you wonder how many in real life have not been saved. If only something could be done about that. It breaks my heart. If my granddaughters were ever taken, I would take up arms and make the men suffer ... bad! Okay, waiting for the next part, Barbara. I guess this novel is almost finished. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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There have been many not found. There's a movie out, and has been for quite a while. "Sound of Freedom is a 2023 American Christian thriller film [ 5 ] directed and co-written by Alejandro Monteverde, and starring Jim Caviezel, Mira Sorvino, and Bill Camp. Caviezel plays Tim Ballard, a former U.S. government agent who embarks on a mission to rescue children from sex traffickers in Colombia." Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from phoegon
Curious will previous post be apart of this chapter? If so I find the concept of this story being a series of posts like a blog or something would make the story even more. I enjoyed it regardless and I'm look forward to part B.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Curious will previous post be apart of this chapter? If so I find the concept of this story being a series of posts like a blog or something would make the story even more. I enjoyed it regardless and I'm look forward to part B.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Yes, this is a novel and it's coming to an end but will still be a while because I only post parts of chapter. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dr. Nad
I enjoyed this chapter in your book very much. Your dialogue was crisp, succinct and easy to follow. You were able to engage in multiple levels of divergent emotions and carry your reader into the experience. I like how you were able to show the challenges of doing this very important work. We were able to see that only the desperation of the girls but the dedication of the rescuers. Great job Barbara
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed this chapter in your book very much. Your dialogue was crisp, succinct and easy to follow. You were able to engage in multiple levels of divergent emotions and carry your reader into the experience. I like how you were able to show the challenges of doing this very important work. We were able to see that only the desperation of the girls but the dedication of the rescuers. Great job Barbara
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are welcome for the encouragement Barbara.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I don't think I have ever been as relieved with an outcome as I was with the girls being saved and in protective custody. Then both Noahnand Mateo are safe. This was a wonderful and happy chapter . I'm so sorry I don't have a six left to give you. It deserves a six. Great writing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I don't think I have ever been as relieved with an outcome as I was with the girls being saved and in protective custody. Then both Noahnand Mateo are safe. This was a wonderful and happy chapter . I'm so sorry I don't have a six left to give you. It deserves a six. Great writing. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Six stars are not a problem. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
That sounds pretty familiar to what happens in many cases. But are never going to know how someone feels unless that person tells them. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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That sounds pretty familiar to what happens in many cases. But are never going to know how someone feels unless that person tells them. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, communication is very important in any relationship.
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great chapter you have penned. I really do hope you do a second book or story line about Noah and Sami. Maybe they get married and have kids and one of their son's want to be like their daddy and do his type of work. Something like that. I just love Sami and Noah. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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This is a really great chapter you have penned. I really do hope you do a second book or story line about Noah and Sami. Maybe they get married and have kids and one of their son's want to be like their daddy and do his type of work. Something like that. I just love Sami and Noah. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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One of my son's says I need to turn my novels into series. I'm thinking about it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice chapter start for chapter 22, Barb. It looks like things are starting to get wrapped up, but knowing you, I wouldn't be surprised with another bump in the road.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Very nice chapter start for chapter 22, Barb. It looks like things are starting to get wrapped up, but knowing you, I wouldn't be surprised with another bump in the road.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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There will be a few more bumps, but... Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
You did it again, another romantic and exciting chapter. Noah's defenses are tumbling down. I'm glad he and Mateo are okay. They rescued a lot of girls, thank God.
Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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You did it again, another romantic and exciting chapter. Noah's defenses are tumbling down. I'm glad he and Mateo are okay. They rescued a lot of girls, thank God.
Well done!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from royowen
Sometimes tough guys build a wall around themselves not because they're tough, but because they are vulnerable to hurt, and not only that but they are not entirely sure of themselves, and like an actor in a play, are playing a role, I think most of us do it. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Sometimes tough guys build a wall around themselves not because they're tough, but because they are vulnerable to hurt, and not only that but they are not entirely sure of themselves, and like an actor in a play, are playing a role, I think most of us do it. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Noah grew up in an orphanage and built a wall around himself to make sure he wasn't hurt. Thank you for the kind review.
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Heh heh
Comment from Wendy G
Well Sami is certainly impetuous and impulsive, many men would run a mile. Still, everyone's different. Seems like their work is nearly over ... Well done.
Wendy
Edits: "Myra's in (a) serious condition...."
Sure, about that?" (remove comma)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Well Sami is certainly impetuous and impulsive, many men would run a mile. Still, everyone's different. Seems like their work is nearly over ... Well done.
Wendy
Edits: "Myra's in (a) serious condition...."
Sure, about that?" (remove comma)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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I didn't want the comma after Sure' but my grammar check kept causing problems, two different ones. I'll be happy to remove it. Thank you for the help. I appreciate it.