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Tranquility......

Reflection time

2 total reviews 
Comment from mermaids
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You have a smooth flow of rhyming words. Your opening line "reflecting on the moon" draws the reader into your poem. I do not know what a boffin is, a very unique word that fits in your poem.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
    Thanks for your feedback.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is excellent writing for the challenge! It has good descriptive words, imagery, and dialogue. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it.

Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
    Thanks for your feedback.