Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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19 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
I think you have done a fine job of the Wordflair poetic here, J.
Your theme and extended metaphor work extremely well throughout all five stanzas.
Well, well done and many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I think you have done a fine job of the Wordflair poetic here, J.
Your theme and extended metaphor work extremely well throughout all five stanzas.
Well, well done and many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thanks Gloria!
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent word flair poem, with clever rhyme between your leading word and the second line of each stanza. A great parallel between the power and fury of natural and the distress within. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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An excellent word flair poem, with clever rhyme between your leading word and the second line of each stanza. A great parallel between the power and fury of natural and the distress within. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I apprecaite your comments!
Comment from Marienkiefer
Interesting poem.
I like the line with the waves lashing in a spray, bringing readers to Center of a raging storm.
-Conflict rising as storm raging is an interesting pivot in final stanza, reverting to internal storm.
Nicely written.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Interesting poem.
I like the line with the waves lashing in a spray, bringing readers to Center of a raging storm.
-Conflict rising as storm raging is an interesting pivot in final stanza, reverting to internal storm.
Nicely written.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much Marien.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Raul, I am beyond words of appreciation for your six-star review! Thank you, sir!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I live one Mike from the Atlantic Ocean and you have described it perfectly. Hurricanes and Nor'easters turn the blue green water into frothing and steel gray. I liked the different ways to describe it. Yours were indicative of the ocean and the occasional bad mood. Lol. Great job. Thoroughly enjoyed. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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I live one Mike from the Atlantic Ocean and you have described it perfectly. Hurricanes and Nor'easters turn the blue green water into frothing and steel gray. I liked the different ways to describe it. Yours were indicative of the ocean and the occasional bad mood. Lol. Great job. Thoroughly enjoyed. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Gretchen thank you for this validation!
Comment from amahra
This seemed like a very difficult poem to write, but you tend you master it all right. I loved that each writing under the titles defined the titles is poetry. Great job, my friend.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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This seemed like a very difficult poem to write, but you tend you master it all right. I loved that each writing under the titles defined the titles is poetry. Great job, my friend.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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amarha, thanking you for tipping your toes into my pool of words.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You did a great job writing this Wordflair poem. All your stanzas are very powerful and well written. I can't write like you. You linked five single words very well. I can sense the storm, rage and anger.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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You did a great job writing this Wordflair poem. All your stanzas are very powerful and well written. I can't write like you. You linked five single words very well. I can sense the storm, rage and anger.
Excellent.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Wow! Thank you for the nice validation and good rating.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your club poem read well, JLR. You did a great job
with the style. I liked the way you formatted the lines.
Your words were well-chosen and meaningful. You
described the situation well. I could see everything
you wrote. The title was perfect as life does have
ups and downs--storms.
Thanks for participating, Jan
my deepest fears brought ne [ me ] here spellbound.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Your club poem read well, JLR. You did a great job
with the style. I liked the way you formatted the lines.
Your words were well-chosen and meaningful. You
described the situation well. I could see everything
you wrote. The title was perfect as life does have
ups and downs--storms.
Thanks for participating, Jan
my deepest fears brought ne [ me ] here spellbound.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the nice validation and for catching the spag.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the potlatch poem challenge. You used very good descriptive words and amazing imagery from the art work you chose. Please check out this one thing:
brought ne here spellbound.
me
Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the potlatch poem challenge. You used very good descriptive words and amazing imagery from the art work you chose. Please check out this one thing:
brought ne here spellbound.
me
Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Teri, good catch! Thanks. 🙏🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
JLR,
There is so much emotion and angst in your poem.
I like the way you use the sea to express emotion.
Great work!
Good luck with all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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JLR,
There is so much emotion and angst in your poem.
I like the way you use the sea to express emotion.
Great work!
Good luck with all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Cindy, Thank you for the nice validation and good wishes. 🙏🙏🎶🎶
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You?re welcome.😊