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: Haiku (lacy white diamonds) by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Understanding the "AHA" in Haiku contest entry

lacy white diamonds
whirl sparkling to the earth
winter's snow gems

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Author Notes
I have used the Leap linkage as shown in the example, which connects the first 2 lines of concrete imagery. The kigo of winter in the AHA moment found in the last line of the Haiku, speaks to the season as opposed to nature in general. I have used 15 sylables

     

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