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Gogyohka 5 Lines Poem
2024 Japanese Poetry
: The Old Lady and the Turtle by Gypsy Blue Rose
Presentation and Poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/26/24

 
 

turtle swallows its lunch 

in one gulp

as grandma watches it

with the kinship 

of a toothless smile

 
 

Author Notes
Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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