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Tough Choice by Terry Reilly
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They still loved each other, but the spark had gone.
 
Predictability, for Fred, was comforting, reassuring.

Freda craved something different, revitalising.

She took the initiative. A new welcome home.

Fred's pick-up scrunched the gravel.

Same time every day. To the minute.

Fred entered and followed the scent trail to the living room.

Freda lay on the couch in a negligee.

"Tie me up," she purred, "and do whatever you want."

So he tied her up and went golfing.



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Write a complete story in 80 words or less.

The theme is 'Surprise.'

You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.
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