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Modern Haiku (rules in author notes) 17 syllables 4 lines
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Wistful Heart by Gypsy Blue Rose
Poem and Presentation by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright@ 11/3/24

 

wistful heart

      rides raging waves—

    the marriage band 

is her lifesaver


Author Notes
Married people may face storms that brings them closer.

Modern Haiku The most common literary adaptation in English of haiku looks something like this: one to four lines, no strict syllable count but brief, and often with a long/short or short/long asymmetry. These poems too utilize a caesura. Images need not be taken from nature, though they may be and often are. Seasonality is optional, though often featured. Here’s an example:
in the woodpile
the broken ax handle


haiku foundation modern haiku fuels

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. The complete presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright /11/3/24

     

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