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lost in a desert
Valse de počmes
: Oasis Dream by Sarah Probe S.
Rhyming Poem contest entry

I'm beautiful but darkened,

Darkened in the scorching sun,

Sun burning my golden skin,

Skin longing for thirst - quenching,

Thirst-quenching dream oasis,

Oasis of heaven's peace,

Peace and silence just disturbed,

Disturbed by a birds concert,

Concerts singing, mind - lifting.

Author Notes
LOOP style poetry portraying a mirage ( 9 verses of 7 syllables )

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