Exceptional Senryu Suite using the five senses 2024 Favorites : Requiem for the Dead by Gypsy Blue Rose rules in author notes

you’re gone and you left your scent on your side of our bed moon rays squeeze through the blinds searching for your eyelids the taste of your bitter last kiss holds on to my lips lonely mockingbird  sings requiem for his dead mate veiled by blue dusk I remember  the contour of your face and the warmth of your embrace     Author Notes - the first senryu came to me in the middle of the night. I woke up and wrote it down. There rest of the suite follow the same theme. - In my senryu suite I covered all the senses: touch, hearing, sight smell, taste - requiem = sad song; a mass for the dead; a solemn chant for the repose of the dead - Mockingbirds birds sing their tunes day and night. This happens most often when males are searching for mates, but full moons also get these crooners going. - A new moon is dark - All my senryu are 17 syllables or less. SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo). Classical senryu was humorous and sarcastic. With time, it has developed into a loser form with any theme. the haiku foundation senryu rules Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Gypsy Pictures from my Pinterest account and all parts of my poems and presentations are copyrighted and registered with Fanstory.

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