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Reflection Haiku in Zen Style
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: He's Not in the Grave by Gypsy Blue Rose
Rules are in My Author Notes

     he's not in the grave —
look for him in the night sky
amidst bright stars

amidst bright stars
     look for him in the night sky —
he's not in the grave

Author Notes
- Haiga is a poem written on a picture
- Reflection Haiku is composed of two haiku, top has a first line, second line, third line; and the second haiku is the opposite: third line, second line, first line.
- Zen haiku was the original haiku the concept is that everything in the universe is infinite, there is no birth and death; the man in the grave has become stars and night

Modern Haiku is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection.The most common literary adaptation in English of haiku looks something like this: one to four lines, no strict syllable count but brief. These poems too utilize a caesura (dash before satori). Images need not be taken from nature, though they may be and often are. Seasonality is optional, though often featured. Here�??�?�¢??s an example: in the woodpile the broken ax handle source

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem

Gypsy

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