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Haiku (rules in my author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Dewdrop Diamonds by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
d e w d r o p      d i a m o n d s
 
    s h i n e   o n   t h e   s p i d e r w e b —
 
c a u g h t    t h e   g o l d e n   s u n r i s e
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection. American haiku doesn't follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succint as possible and 17 syllables or less. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation.


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Gypsy
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