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A Merry~go~Rhyme about the inevitable empty nest
Empty Nest by Debi Pick Marquette



When babies, it seemed they would grow

From stage to stage, so very slow

The younger years, wished I could keep

Time only for work, school, and sleep


I held them in my arms to rock, and peacefully caressed

And when I'd softly sing and talk, they snuggled to my breast


I'd take them places that were fun

But blinked and their childhood was done

I always knew it wouldn't last

But it would happen way too fast


I knew I had to set them free and that I did my best

And then it seemed that my dear three, left me an empty nest


After they married I became

A new grandma ~ I loved that name

A second home, for grandkids here

A laughing, crazy atmosphere


Inside of it, I put the treats, then hid the treasure chest

The sleep overs, tents made of sheets, my home was a fun~fest

 
I blinked again and then I knew

My grandkids had grown their wings too

Their visits show me they still care

For this nostalgic grandma-bear 


I'll tell them all the fun I miss; they know my next request

Before they leave, a hug and kiss; then grandma's empty nest


Once more my life would shine some light

When God led me again to write 

I hope my kids and grandkids will

Know wonder years, are wonders still


Dear kids, please always feel my love; because of you, I'm blessed

And up close, I'll thank God above, when I'm laid to my rest

 

 ' Till then, Ive been put to the test~ so far survived, this empty nest
 
 

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Author Notes
My Merry~go~Rhyme Rules
must rhyme
must be fun
normal 4 line stanzas
with a fun line or 2 between each stanza (for the up and down carousel effect)

The ones who made my empty nest for me:

My kids: Michelle, Jason and Bridget
My grandkids:
Kenzie - 20 (granddaughter who's art I often use)
Connor - 20
Clara - 17
Andrew - 16
Carter - 13
Keaton - 12


     

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