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I Love My Flat Walking Shoes
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: Circus Poem Ode ~ Walking Shoes by Debi Pick Marquette
    Ode Poem Contest Winner 


I miss my flat walking shoes

The way they made me feel

 I could go farther 

So much farther than all the others

So far that even my fitness tracker couldn't find me


I love the feeling of that flat rubber sole

 They are so wonderful ~ I love that great control 

They feel so amazing 

Until it rubs on my toe

Then for just a day or so ~ I'm moving kinda slow

                                     
   They go with almost anything, that's hanging in my closet

A stylish baggy sweatshirt 

Classy stretch pants with no seams

A cute little t~shirt
            
A pair of skinny jeans


   Almost anything I choose

                                        Because I love love love

                                                      I love my flat walking shoes

While I tell you about loving things, that are in the style of flat

Wish a couple upper body parts, were a little more like that


I haven't worn them for a while, but I am hopeful for the Spring

The birds won't be the only ones, who will rejoice and Sing

So when I wear those flat walkers
I'll show some attitudes

The only thing that I wear now
Is a pair of flat "Hey Dudes"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So please allow me this one time

To pen this verse with no real rhyme

I love my flat ~ very flat ~  no arch flat ~ (not that flat) 

                             

                                            ~I love my flat Walking Shoes ~
 


Writing Prompt
Write an ode to anything you want as long as it is not about a person or an animal. Comparison can be made to people or animals. It can be funny or serious. Personification allowed. Rhyming or not is up to you. The subject is up to you, please keep it clean. Pictures and author's notes allowed.
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Author Notes
THIS IS MY ATTEMPT TO DO A HUMOROUS TAKE ON SALLY'S AWESOME CIRCUS POEM, "I LOVE THOSE HIGH HEEL SHOES." AND BECAUSE THEY ARE SO MUCH FUN TO WRITE, I JUST HAD TO MAKE MY ODE TO CIRCUS POEMS.

     

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