General Poetry posted May 13, 2017


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Just Drifting

by starkat


                                       Just 
                                      drifting
                                     on a sea
                                   of forgotten
                          memories and dreams
                             flourishing fantasies
                             removed from reality,
                        ready to sail to Shangri-La
        where dream-pillows are stuffed with starlight,
        then tossed and turned on vast oceans of time

                                             ~

 

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Etheree Poetry contest entry

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Etheree - 10 lines with syllable counts of 1-10

Shangri-La is a fictional place described in the 1933 novel, Lost Horizon by James Hilton. Shangri-La has become synonymous with any earthly paradise - a permanently happy land, isolated from the outside world.

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