Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 20, 2014


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Words may hurt but sometimes there is an underlying truth.

Hurt feelings (a senryu)

by persevere

hurtful comment made
hours of rumination
discovered home truth



Write A Senryu writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
A senryu is a three line Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku. It is unrhymed and the subject is based human nature. Line 1 - 5 syllables - Line 2 - 7 syllables - Line 3 - 5 syllables. I
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