Gist in the Bliss - Part 1

by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

"Gist in the Bliss - Part 1"

Above the Elysian fields and cobalt skies
Lies a sweet summer land of bliss
Awaiting for all who dare to live
In the substance of things hoped for
An evidential stream of becoming
What the Almighty intends
Come leave your burdens
Journey with us to this land
A forever dwelling place, called Paradise

The gist in the bliss
Is when we have found peace
Life unfolds in pieces and bits
With complaints on long list
Take flight with the graceful geese
This is a heaven on Earth
Where we can earn life's worth
The secret of nature's gist
To make life into a brilliant glitz

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This is a Duet Poem co-written by me and Ritchie aka 9999pool, as a creative form, of expression in poetry.
The poem 'Gist in the Bliss' has two parts, Part 1 & 2. Part 2 is posted by 9999pool. We hope you enjoy our duet. Thanks for reading, Carolyn

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A chapter in the book The Heart of Poetry

Gist in the Bliss - Part 1

by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

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