General Poetry posted August 24, 2013


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A 5-7-5 on Melancholy

senryu (windows streaked deep blue)

by vkmack


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windows streaked deep blue
unguarded tears of the soul
melancholy reigns



Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a senryu. Unrhymed Japanese verse of 5/7/5 syllables. Using human emotion.


I included a bit of word play in the last line.
Punctuation omitted.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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