General Poetry posted August 23, 2013


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senyr contest 5/7/5

senyru (city people stare)

by Val Crisson


city people stare
intently into cell phones
homeless in shadows




Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a senryu. Unrhymed Japanese verse of 5/7/5 syllables. Using human emotion.

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We are becoming such an isolated society, and this is a simple little human message in senyru style.
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