General Poetry posted March 18, 2025


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We Were Havin' A Ton Of...

Family Fun In The Summer Sun.

by rhonnie69

One happy day in the merry month of May,
my folks-n-I were on a picnic.

A funny thing happened to us that day,
that made my parents sick quick.

Dad left our picnic basket sittin' in the grass.
Then headed for a near-by stream, to try
and catch some bass.

Mom was in our tent house resting her eyes.
Without a doubt we were about to have a big surprise.

Beneath a tasty sandwich, of ham, cheese, and rye.
We're a bunch of busy honey bees...feasting on honey pie.

When the basket lid was opened...the bees began to buzz.
Mom and Dad did not agree...but what a funny thing that was."



This is serious writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type that treats a serious subject as humor.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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