General Poetry posted January 23, 2025


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Lune contest entry

Unseen

by Debra White

 
 
My beacon red coat
is broken -
Invisible me
 
 



Lune Poetry Contest contest entry


Not one, not two, but three people bumped into me this morning as I walked to work! My coat is really, really bright. I honestly think I am invisible! Or maybe it's just that people are glued to their cell phones instead of looking where they are going...
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