Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 21, 2025


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Diatelle

Little Hurts

by Trina Layne


The author has placed a warning on this post for violence.
What 
Hurts me?
Cavities
Algebra class 
Cramps, infidelities 
Wars that spill blood, wanton and crass 
Set clouds ablaze and clog eyes with tear gas 
The Fight kidnaps fathers, ruins sisters, pours dots 
Into sheep, sadistic ballistics pass 
Through fields of flesh, slashing plates, glass
Partitions and babies.
Wasted landmass
Idle bees
Bodies
Rot. 



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Writing Prompt
Write a diatelle for this poetry contest. A diatelle has a set syllable count and a set rhyme.


The syllable count is: 1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1. The rhyme patter is: abbcbccaccbcbba. It is usually displayed centered. See an example here.


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I am looking forward to a time when no more wars will occur.

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