Horror and Thriller Fiction posted January 18, 2025 Chapters:  ...13 14 -15- 16 


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A war of the few against a syndicate
A chapter in the book Burn It All Down

The Inferno

by marilyn quillen


The author has placed a warning on this post for violence.



Background
Alex Dane and Ethan Grayson once hunter and prey are now forced to join forces. Together, they lead a battle-hardened team of operatives against the Syndicate, a shadow organization bent on plungi
The detonator felt incredibly weighty in Alex's hand, almost as if it were a leaden burden; the blinking red light pulsed rhythmically, mirroring his racing heart. He crouched behind a rugged boulder, gazing into the smoky tumult of the forest. Every instinct urged him to move, to flee, to take action. However, he remained frozen, aware of the stakes involved. Although fear coursed through him, he understood that this moment could change everything.

But he didn't. Not yet.

Ahead, the forest was teeming with flames and shadows a stark contrast. Grayson's traps had transformed the previously tranquil wilderness into a battleground. Fire licked at the trees, casting jagged, dancing silhouettes over the operatives who were advancing through the tumult. Their dark forms moved like predators disciplined and relentless. Their weapons sliced through the smoky air, producing sharp bursts of gunfire. However, somewhere amidst this chaos, Grayson was fighting alone.

"Make sure it ends."

His voice reverberated within Alex's mind, the words laden with a sense of finality. Grayson had not explicitly stated it; however, Alex understood the underlying implication. The mission took precedence. The individuals pursuing them, the ones orchestrating the creatures and experiments could not be permitted to persist. But could Alex truly allow Grayson to perish because of this?

The sound of gunfire abruptly disrupted his contemplation. One of the drones descended swiftly, its spotlight piercing through the smoke as it targeted a moving figure. Alex did not need to speculate as to who it was.

"Damn it," Alex muttered quietly to himself, rising to his feet.

Grayson's Stand

Grayson navigated the inferno with a ghostly agility, his rifle discharging in rapid, precise bursts. Each shot incapacitated an operative or compelled them to seek shelter, thereby granting him invaluable seconds to adjust his position.

The flames, working to his advantage, veiled him from view and sowed confusion among the enemy ranks. However, the drones remained unyielding. One hovered above, its spotlight scanning the terrain and locking onto Grayson as he dashed for cover. Bullets shredded the trees surrounding him, compelling him to dive behind a fallen log. He reloaded with remarkable speed; his fingers remained steady despite the oppressive heat and smoke. His eyes darted toward the cluster of operatives advancing toward the rocky outcrop, toward the charges he had meticulously planted.

"Come on," he muttered quietly, almost inaudibly. "Just a little closer."

Suddenly, another drone emerged, its engines emitting a high-pitched whine as it hovered ominously above him. Grayson fired, the shot connecting with its camera; but the machine did not waver. It retaliated, a volley of rounds shredding the log and sending splinters flying in all directions.

Grayson gritted his teeth, rising to his knees as he prepared to aim once more. This time, the shot found its target. The drone spiraled out of control, plummeting into the flames with a thunderous explosion.

The triumph was fleeting, the operatives had reorganized, their attention redirecting toward him. Grayson stood up, his rifle snapping into position as he discharged rounds into the approaching contingent.

"Where the hell are you, Dane?" he muttered, his voice strained.

Alex's Choice

From his vantage point, Alex observed everything: the drones, the operatives and Grayson's desperate struggle to fend them off. The charges were positioned, the detonator primed but his hand remained immobile. If he pressed the button, it would signify an end. The operatives would perish, the mission would be deemed successful, but so would Grayson. The fire blazed louder, the heat bearing down on his skin and the air was thick with smoke. Alex's mind was racing, his heart pounding in his chest.

He recalled the facility, the creatures, the experiments, all the horrors he had witnessed. Could he rationalize sacrificing one man to halt it all? Grayson had made his decision. He had entrusted Alex with the detonator. Although that did not alleviate the weight of the choice.

Another round of gunfire erupted, causing Alex to flinch. He glanced up just in time to witness Grayson being hit, his body jerking as a bullet struck his shoulder. He stumbled, collapsing to one knee, but he continued to fire.

Alex's grip on the detonator tightened. His vision blurred from sweat and smoke, his breath uneven. Time was slipping away.

"Damn it, Grayson," he muttered under his breath. "You'd better hate me for this." He shoved the detonator into his pocket and raced toward the conflict.

The Last Push

Alex navigated through the flames his rifle raised, focus sharp. The operatives were converging on Grayson, their weapons trained and movements methodical.

Alex fired, eliminating the nearest one before they could react; the others turned, their surprise providing him the crucial opening he required. He fired again, his shots precise, slicing through their ranks. Grayson seized the opportunity created by the distraction, rising to his feet and firing in tandem with Alex.

"You were supposed to blow the charges!" Grayson shouted amidst the chaos.

"Change of plans!" Alex yelled back, ducking behind a burning tree as bullets whizzed past him.

Grayson shook his head, a faint smirk tugging at his lips despite the blood soaking his shoulder.

"You're an idiot."

"Yeah, well," Alex muttered, firing once more. "You're welcome."

The pair moved together, their actions instinctive, their firepower overwhelming the remaining operatives. The drones circled overhead, but their focus wavered because their operators likely scrambled to adapt to the turmoil.

Finally, the last operative collapsed. The forest fell eerily quiet, except for the crackle of flames and the distant hum of the remaining drones.

Grayson turned to Alex, his expression hard:

"Do you realize what you just did?" Alex nodded, his chest heaving.

"Yeah. I saved your ass."

Grayson's smirk faded. "And now they're going to send more."

Although the situation seemed dire, there was a hint of determination in Alex's voice because he understood the gravity of their predicament. This made Grayson's resolve even stronger, but the weight of the impending threat loomed over them.

The Detonator

Alex retrieved the detonator from his pocket, raising it with a firm grip.

"We still have this," he stated. Grayson regarded it cautiously,

"You sure you're ready to use it now?"

Alex hesitated before responding.

He surveyed the devastated landscape, the burning forest, the charred remnants of drones and operatives. The facility might be in ruins; however, the individuals responsible for it, the ones who'd orchestrated all of this, would continue to pursue their agenda.

Unless he stopped them here.

He pressed the button.

The explosion reverberated through the ground, a deafening roar that seemed to obliterate all other sounds. Charges detonated in a series of reactions, ripping through the forest and devouring everything in their trajectory. The fire surged upward; the heat was so intense that it felt as though the very air was ablaze.

Grayson and Alex dropped to the ground, attempting to shield themselves from the shockwave that swept over them. When it ultimately subsided, an eerie silence enveloped the forest. The drones had vanished. The operatives were nowhere to be found.

And so was the facility.

The Aftermath

Alex rose gradually his body protesting, his ears ringing incessantly. The forest was unrecognizable: a charred wasteland of smoldering trees and blackened earth. Above, the sky appeared dull gray, smoke obscuring the stars. Grayson lingered nearby, his rifle draped across his back; his expression remained inscrutable.

"You did it," he remarked softly.

However, the weight of the moment hung heavily in the air. Although there was a sense of achievement, the devastation surrounding them and its implications cast a long shadow.

Alex nodded, his throat dry. "We did it."

Grayson regarded him for a prolonged moment before reaching out a hand. "You're not bad in a fight, Dane." Alex offered a faint smirk, reciprocating the handshake.

"And you're not as much of an ass as I had anticipated." Grayson's smirk reappeared, however, it was short-lived.

His gaze returned to the forest, his expression hardening considerably.

"This isn't over. You know that, right?" Alex followed his gaze, the weight of the truth settling heavily upon him.

"Yeah. I know." They remained in silence, the fire crackling behind them, the conflict far from resolved.


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