Romance Poetry posted January 3, 2025 Chapters:  ...63 64 -65- 66... 


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A 5-7-5 follow up chapter in the book of Renga
A chapter in the book BOOK OF RENGA POEMS

As Spring Moon Rises

by June Sargent

as spring moon rises,
illuminating her tomb ~
Shah weeps bitterly




The mausoleum Taj Mahal was commissioned by Shah Jahan in 1631 to memorialize the death of his empress Mumtaz Mahal, who had died in childbirth. It was completed in 1648 and is considered a wonder of the modern world.

To continue this book of Renga, the next poem should contain 7/7 syllables to maintain the pattern of a 5/7/5 followed by a 7/7 with a similar theme.
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