General Poetry posted December 29, 2024


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Enduring Love in the Twilight Years

Intimacy Need Not Wane With Age

by Peter Jarvis

In twilight years love’s refined 
two naked bodies intertwine 
 



Under Ten Competition writing prompt entry
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In this prompt the poet must try and submit a poem that is under ten words. Any style. Rhyming is optional.


The imagery of love being refined and bodies intertwining speaks to the deep connection and tenderness that can only be experienced with age.

I think that it is often the case that you do not know how much you love someone until they are no longer around.
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