| General Fiction posted December 14, 2024 |
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A man*s gotta do***
Tough Choice
by Terry Reilly
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They still loved each other, but the spark had gone.
Predictability, for Fred, was comforting, reassuring.
Freda craved something different, revitalising.
She took the initiative. A new welcome home.
Fred's pick-up scrunched the gravel.
Same time every day. To the minute.
Fred entered and followed the scent trail to the living room.
Freda lay on the couch in a negligee.
"Tie me up," she purred, "and do whatever you want."
So he tied her up and went golfing.
They still loved each other, but the spark had gone.
Predictability, for Fred, was comforting, reassuring.
Freda craved something different, revitalising.
She took the initiative. A new welcome home.
Fred's pick-up scrunched the gravel.
Same time every day. To the minute.
Fred entered and followed the scent trail to the living room.
Freda lay on the couch in a negligee.
"Tie me up," she purred, "and do whatever you want."
So he tied her up and went golfing.
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