Writing Poetry posted December 8, 2024


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relationship burnout, toxicity

wasted breath

by Eli Nolan

you burn me out like an old cigarette,
letting the ashes fall to the ground.
as soon as it's finished, you light another,
wasting your every breath on something that's gone
 
forever.
 
 

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