Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 10, 2024


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A Breath of Fresh Air

by pome lover

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I feel I can actually smile again,

And take a deep breath and relax;

Conservative patriots spoke with their votes—

Our reaction to truth and to facts!

 

It’d really be nice if the other side

Would learn from the current event,

Trump won fair and square this election—

But, no, they scream foul, and lament.

 

Their record is really appalling—

The radical Left who had clout—

They lied and broke laws and spewed gallons of hate

And incited taking Trump out!

 

They don’t care a hoot for their country

They destroy it each chance that they get;

They think we’re some ignorant garbage—

Well, they ain’t seen nothin’ yet!

 

We learned from “the Trump” a good lesson

We all need to stand strong and fight;

The day he’s sworn in as our next President,

We’ll support him with all of our might!

 

Trump is for every American

No matter race, gender or creed;

He’ll bring back our honor and prove that we are

Trustworthy and strong, yes, indeed!

 

We’ve had quite enough of their lying,

The falsehoods they rant and call News,

But they didn’t count on the Vance/Wals debate

The truth came out, people could choose!

 

The Biden reign took a great country

And trampled it into the dust;

They lied through their teeth about Donald J. Trump

And some people, listening, lost trust.

 

What, in Trump’s four years was terrible?

What was it the Dems didn’t like?

That we had respect as a country?

That we were fair people with might?

 

Our economy was good, a safe border,

no made up race/gender abuse

except those Obama and Sharpton made up,

the farce that they spread, fast and loose.

 

Did they not like that they had low taxes?

And parents of school kids had rights?

That Trump put American citizens first

Through years of the Left’s hateful slights?

 

Just think of Kamala and Tim Walz

If either of them had been shot

Do you think that either’d continue to run?

I’d bet anything they would not.

 

For bravery doesn’t define them

Nor does a good sound, solid plan;

The American people weren’t first in their minds,

Just power and perks, on demand.

 

During four years of Biden and Harris

My anger turned into grief;

I couldn’t believe that Americans would

Socialist ideas believe,

 

That children could be mutilated,

That males could join in women’s sports,

That good, common sense seemed to fritter away

And weird and strange things of all sorts

 

Were okay for teachers to teach kids

And parents were told to desist

and they were made out as the villains

who their children were taught to resist!

 

Did the press even mention Minneapolis

When Walz pranced around on the scene?

What did he do as governor you might ask,

Nothing, he was a smokescreen

 

For control like his good Chinese buddies,

And two-faced Kamala was, too.

Americans knew they were better than that,

And Americans knew what to do!

 

I think, once the Left next buys groceries

Or looks at their gasoline cost,

And see countries buying OUR clean oil again,

They’ll realize the things we had lost.

 

I believe God saved Trump and America

And freedom will reign once again,

And those who think that is a bad thing to have,

Well, they sure don’t have to remain!

 



Writing Prompt


Write a poem with any sort of rhyming schematic to commemorate or lament the election. Anger, profanity, and gloating are permitted as long as there is rhyming and appropriate content disclaimers are included.

POLITICAL COMMENTARY IN THE AUTHOR NOTES IS NOT PERMITTED. Use your poem to say what you have to say. Author notes may be used to cite other content on or off of FanStory which is itself political, and you may include images and videos with text (eg memes), just not a bunch of text in the notes.

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