General Fiction posted November 3, 2024 |
Escaping Candyland
Sugar's edge
by Patty Mazzurco
In Candyland, every step could be a step forward—or a fall back. The place had once been a land of innocence, but now it was full of twisted delights and half-hidden dangers. The gumdrop streets were still bright and colorful, but they were worn and sticky, dulled by decades of misuse. Candy-colored skies loomed above in pastel shades, but they felt like a cage for those who’d lost themselves here.
Sweet Susie was one of them. She hadn’t always been lost, though. Once, she was the kid everyone loved, the one with an endless grin and pockets full of joy. But somewhere along the way, she took a detour—a bad roll of the dice—and stumbled onto Sugar Street, where the powdered sweetness flowed. They called it Dust. The first taste was like cotton candy clouds melting on your tongue, a gentle drift into euphoria. But it didn’t take long before that first taste turned into a second, and then a third, until Dust was all she could think about.
It was supposed to help her feel free, like she could fly. But soon, she was caught in Candyland’s endless cycle of hope and failure, chasing highs that never lasted. She started playing the game of Candyland itself, going up and down those familiar slides, never knowing where she’d end up. There was always that rush when she reached a ladder—a quick step up, closer to freedom. But then came the slides, those slippery slopes that sucked her down faster than she could blink. They were everywhere, waiting around every sugary corner, and she never knew when she’d step on one.
Susie had promised herself she’d quit Dust so many times she’d lost count. The Lollipop Ladder, the biggest climb in town, became her goal. Rumor had it, if you climbed all the way up, you’d get a view of Candyland’s borders, a glimpse of the outside world—something real, something beyond the pastel haze that trapped them all. But every time she tried to reach it, there was a slide, hidden in the shimmer of Candyland’s endless temptations. Sometimes, it was a well-meaning “friend” offering her a quick hit. Other times, it was just the sight of Powdered Falls, the waterfall of Dust that flowed through the heart of Candyland, luring anyone who got too close.
Every relapse felt like falling down one of those slides, spiraling further down into the sickly sweetness that left her weaker each time. When she stumbled, the game laughed at her, as if Candyland itself took pleasure in her failures. She’d slide down, down, deeper into its sticky clutches, and every fall bruised her a little more.
Then there was the Peppermint Promiser, a tall, thin man in a red-striped suit who claimed he could help anyone get clean. Susie had heard his promises before, so sweet and minty they burned her ears. He always waited at the bottom of the biggest slides, offering a hand up. “One step at a time,” he’d say, a friendly grin stretched too wide across his face. “Just follow me.” She’d tried his promises a few times, but the truth was, he never had a plan that worked. He just liked watching people fall, so he could catch them again. He lived off their relapses, an endless cycle that kept Candyland going.
One night, after another long fall, Susie lay at the bottom of a slide, watching the pastel stars twinkle through her haze of exhaustion and Dust. She was starting to feel like she’d never make it out. But then, she saw something—someone she hadn’t expected. Cinnamon Chuck, one of the few who’d actually made it to the top of the Lollipop Ladder and left Candyland for good. He was a legend among the addicts here, a story that gave them hope. People whispered about him, wondering if he’d found something real on the outside.
“You don’t belong here, Susie,” Chuck said, kneeling beside her, his eyes sharp and clear. “You’ve got to stop looking at the ladders and slides. They’re just a game to keep you here.”
Susie stared at him, confused. “But… how else do I get out?”
“You find the edges,” he replied softly, leaning closer. “Don’t play by Candyland’s rules. The game’s rigged, and it’s meant to keep you trapped.”
That night, Susie lay awake, thinking about what he’d said. It seemed impossible. But the next morning, instead of heading toward the Lollipop Ladder or trying to avoid the slides, she made her way through the forgotten parts of Candyland, the alleys where the colors faded, where the candy coating cracked to reveal something more solid underneath.
Days turned into weeks. She wandered along Peppermint Ridge, through Gumdrop Woods, following a different path every day. Sometimes she’d stumble, the Dust’s pull dragging her down a slide again, but each time, she reminded herself what Chuck had said. Slowly, she started seeing the borders of Candyland, the spots where the sugary facade wore thin.
Finally, one evening, she reached a place where the candy grass gave way to real soil, where the pastel sky cracked open just enough to show a glimpse of a darker, richer blue beyond. It wasn’t much, but it was enough to give her hope. She took a deep breath, the smell of fresh earth filling her lungs instead of sugar, and she felt something shift inside her.
There was no victory parade, no grand ladder waiting at the end. Just her, on her own two feet, finally leaving behind the slides and ladders of Candyland, breaking free from the cycle that had held her for so long.
As she crossed that final threshold, she glanced back one last time. The pastel glow of Candyland faded behind her, a place she’d once thought was all she’d ever know. But now, she knew better. She wasn’t a piece in their game anymore. She was free.
Candyland contest entry
In Candyland, every step could be a step forward—or a fall back. The place had once been a land of innocence, but now it was full of twisted delights and half-hidden dangers. The gumdrop streets were still bright and colorful, but they were worn and sticky, dulled by decades of misuse. Candy-colored skies loomed above in pastel shades, but they felt like a cage for those who’d lost themselves here.
Sweet Susie was one of them. She hadn’t always been lost, though. Once, she was the kid everyone loved, the one with an endless grin and pockets full of joy. But somewhere along the way, she took a detour—a bad roll of the dice—and stumbled onto Sugar Street, where the powdered sweetness flowed. They called it Dust. The first taste was like cotton candy clouds melting on your tongue, a gentle drift into euphoria. But it didn’t take long before that first taste turned into a second, and then a third, until Dust was all she could think about.
It was supposed to help her feel free, like she could fly. But soon, she was caught in Candyland’s endless cycle of hope and failure, chasing highs that never lasted. She started playing the game of Candyland itself, going up and down those familiar slides, never knowing where she’d end up. There was always that rush when she reached a ladder—a quick step up, closer to freedom. But then came the slides, those slippery slopes that sucked her down faster than she could blink. They were everywhere, waiting around every sugary corner, and she never knew when she’d step on one.
Susie had promised herself she’d quit Dust so many times she’d lost count. The Lollipop Ladder, the biggest climb in town, became her goal. Rumor had it, if you climbed all the way up, you’d get a view of Candyland’s borders, a glimpse of the outside world—something real, something beyond the pastel haze that trapped them all. But every time she tried to reach it, there was a slide, hidden in the shimmer of Candyland’s endless temptations. Sometimes, it was a well-meaning “friend” offering her a quick hit. Other times, it was just the sight of Powdered Falls, the waterfall of Dust that flowed through the heart of Candyland, luring anyone who got too close.
Every relapse felt like falling down one of those slides, spiraling further down into the sickly sweetness that left her weaker each time. When she stumbled, the game laughed at her, as if Candyland itself took pleasure in her failures. She’d slide down, down, deeper into its sticky clutches, and every fall bruised her a little more.
Then there was the Peppermint Promiser, a tall, thin man in a red-striped suit who claimed he could help anyone get clean. Susie had heard his promises before, so sweet and minty they burned her ears. He always waited at the bottom of the biggest slides, offering a hand up. “One step at a time,” he’d say, a friendly grin stretched too wide across his face. “Just follow me.” She’d tried his promises a few times, but the truth was, he never had a plan that worked. He just liked watching people fall, so he could catch them again. He lived off their relapses, an endless cycle that kept Candyland going.
One night, after another long fall, Susie lay at the bottom of a slide, watching the pastel stars twinkle through her haze of exhaustion and Dust. She was starting to feel like she’d never make it out. But then, she saw something—someone she hadn’t expected. Cinnamon Chuck, one of the few who’d actually made it to the top of the Lollipop Ladder and left Candyland for good. He was a legend among the addicts here, a story that gave them hope. People whispered about him, wondering if he’d found something real on the outside.
“You don’t belong here, Susie,” Chuck said, kneeling beside her, his eyes sharp and clear. “You’ve got to stop looking at the ladders and slides. They’re just a game to keep you here.”
Susie stared at him, confused. “But… how else do I get out?”
“You find the edges,” he replied softly, leaning closer. “Don’t play by Candyland’s rules. The game’s rigged, and it’s meant to keep you trapped.”
That night, Susie lay awake, thinking about what he’d said. It seemed impossible. But the next morning, instead of heading toward the Lollipop Ladder or trying to avoid the slides, she made her way through the forgotten parts of Candyland, the alleys where the colors faded, where the candy coating cracked to reveal something more solid underneath.
Days turned into weeks. She wandered along Peppermint Ridge, through Gumdrop Woods, following a different path every day. Sometimes she’d stumble, the Dust’s pull dragging her down a slide again, but each time, she reminded herself what Chuck had said. Slowly, she started seeing the borders of Candyland, the spots where the sugary facade wore thin.
Finally, one evening, she reached a place where the candy grass gave way to real soil, where the pastel sky cracked open just enough to show a glimpse of a darker, richer blue beyond. It wasn’t much, but it was enough to give her hope. She took a deep breath, the smell of fresh earth filling her lungs instead of sugar, and she felt something shift inside her.
There was no victory parade, no grand ladder waiting at the end. Just her, on her own two feet, finally leaving behind the slides and ladders of Candyland, breaking free from the cycle that had held her for so long.
As she crossed that final threshold, she glanced back one last time. The pastel glow of Candyland faded behind her, a place she’d once thought was all she’d ever know. But now, she knew better. She wasn’t a piece in their game anymore. She was free.
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