Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 20, 2024


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An introspective rhymed verse

Sweet Release on Pathways Wide

by Mrs. KT



My world is framed by fleeting days
Filled often by perplexing ways
That seep into my daily life
And cause their share of undo strife


On recent dawn, I stepped outside
To sort my thoughts on pathways wide
And find a way to calm my fears
That echoed far; that hovered near


And in those hours of frosty morn
When fields lay bare of summer's corn,
And trees had shed their garbs of green,
I memorized each passing scene


Of twirling, dancing crimson leaves
Cascading down in autumn breeze 
As chipmunks searched for acorns round
While flickers* made their drumming sound






Of blue jays squawking, "Jay! Jay! Jay!"
As I continued on my way
Toward the lake where holly* grows
In wild abandon, not in rows





Of red-tailed fox who lingered near
To lap fresh water without fear,
And though I stood within his sight,
He sensed I was not cause for flight






And as I paused in silent awe
Of what I heard, and touched, and saw
I felt a calm come over me
Not all at once, but by degree:


So many days spent in a race
To reach a goal; to win first place
Yet, striding free beyond closed walls,
Renewal waited; it enthralled
 
 
I bowed my head in thankful prayer
That I should still be roused to care;
May nature's pathways never cease 
To fill my soul with sweet release...
 
                                                                                                         
                                             



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Our northern Michigan woods and lakes are filled with chipmunks, red-tailed foxes, blue jays, Michigan holly, and the Northern Flicker woodpecker.
The photos embedded in my poem are free google images of the common chipmunk stuffing his pouch with acorns, the wild and wooly Winterberry Holly that Michiganders refer to as "Michigan holly" that grows in abundance along the ponds, marshes, and lakes of northern Michigan, the red-tailed fox (We have a resident red-tailed fox that lives in our neighborhood), and the ever-scolding Blue Jay who seems to accompany me whenever I roam the wide pathways of my world.

A wonderful video to introduce readers to Winterberry Holly:



For folks who are unfamiliar with the Northern Flicker, here is some interesting information: Wood is everything to the Northern Flicker: nesting site, food source, and resting perch. This bird's favorite habitat is an open grove of trees. Flickers like to use the exposed ground to forage for insects. Northern Flickers will still live in areas without many trees if there are wooden structures that take their place.
(birdfeederhub.com/facts-about-northern-flickers/)




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diane kenel-truelove
10/20/2024

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