General Poetry posted March 14, 2024


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I thought this was one of my prettier poems. So just sharing

Goodbye

by Sombul Augustine


Goodbye
 
 
It’s a memory 
I’m trapping it 
In a glass bottle for you 
When the time comes 
When I’m gone 
Say goodbye
Move on 
Let the the bottle float 
In the ocean 
On a sunny day 
With a smile 
Because I love you so!
goodbye, goodbye

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