By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Anything in the way of feedback or suggestions is always eagerly sought. I had quite a few short stories that I was going to chose from. I decided to start from scratch. It is possible that I am not all there! Hopefully you are, as you have been in the past. Hahaha. mikey |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Here is the first chapter. What do you think? Do you like the characters? Setting? Story so far? Input positive and negative always appreciated greatly. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
This book will jump around a little more than my previous ones. It will go from present to past. It will also have scenes that are in Baton Rouge where Harpster's illegitimate daughter lives. Input and suggestions always welcomed and appreciated.
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead investigative detective. Perhaps the only one that thinks there is a murder to investigate. Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Quite a bit to establish and set up and I don't want to be in too big a hurry. The posting norm is to have each "Chapter" be somewhat complete. I'll try to conform to that when possible, but I don't want to alter the story too much just to have a little cliff-hanger at the end. If there is a less than thrilling chapter here and there, read page 341 of Moby Dick, not too exciting either. Hahaha. Don't go looking, I just made that up! Input and suggestions as always most welcome and appreciated. Thank you so much for your help so far. Excellent!! mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead investigative detective. Perhaps the only one that thinks there is a murder to investigate. Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Trying to follow the story line even when it doesn't quite conform to what a regular post might be here. I hope it doesn't throw things off kilter too much. I'm trying to look at the whole piece and not just parts. I've been known to get into trouble throwing things in on a whim. Hahaha. Great input and suggestions. I hope you'll continue to feel free to offer ideas, help and critique. mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead investigative detective. Perhaps the only one that thinks there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. |
By michaelcahill
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Suggestions and input so very much welcome and appreciated. What do you think so far. Am I over looking anything?
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead investigative detective. Perhaps the only one that thinks there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. |
By michaelcahill
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Whodonit? I don't know. Do you? Getting more complicated and will a bit more before it starts to come together. Hahaha. HOPEFULLY!! Loving the wonderful input and suggestions. They are having heavy influence so I hope you continue to offer. I hope to be able to start catching up with responses this coming week. Sorry that I am so woefully behind. Internet disasters. Reading with excitement and interest. I'm sure you must see your input at work in the story already! mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead investigative detective. Perhaps the only one that thinks there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. |
By michaelcahill
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Lots of suspicion, but no evidence. It is a tangled web, but so far nothing is trapped in it. Tenaya's partner Lucy is attempting to get on the inside by working undercover as the Blackwell's nanny. Any thoughts or tips. Ruby Dancer is still unaware that Blackwell Senior is her father. Tenaya has supects but no evidence. Meanwhile, Seniors body is conveniently absent in deep freeze. Amazing input. Thank you so much. mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead investigative detective. Perhaps the only one that thinks there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. |
By michaelcahill
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A couple requests for longer posts. Is this too long? Let me know. How about the pace? Still introducing and setting up. Suggestions? Wonderful input as always. If you are enjoying the story please tell me. That is just as important as critique. Knowing I am on track is just as important as knowing I am off track. Thanks so much. mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. |
By michaelcahill
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The story is starting to crystallize. Any input or suggestions? Everything suggested so far has been of great help. Wonderful input. Thank you so much. mikey
REMEMBER: Most of the poetry is dialogue that the Bard is speaking in the middle of his sentences as he speaks. There are a couple exceptions. But, in general, you can just read the poem as though it is him speaking. characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. |
By michaelcahill
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Rolling along. A surprise coming. With my internet being down, I've had plenty of time to write. How do you like the direction this is going. It is a surprise to me. Hoping for suggestions and input. So far your help has been awesome.
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother |
By michaelcahill
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Surprise! So, how do you like the direction? What do you mean, what direction? Hahaha. Input and suggestions. I don't know what these detectives are going to do. There is something going on, but what? Suggestions and input would be most appreciated!!
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
The feedback has been so encouraging and helpful. I love all of the ideas and suggestions. You would be surprised how little things stick in one's head and influence direction sometimes. Please feel free to offer anything. Thank you very much.
In N Out is a popular fast food chain in the U.S.-Animal style is extra lettuce, tomato, cheese & onion. You have to ask for it. It isn't offered. You have to be in the know! The term "Flip" refers to making up rhymes or lyrics on the spot to music being played. A good rapper can make up intricate rhymes and meters on the spot. Some of the best rappers like Eminem and Tupac Shakur are true poets. (my opinion) characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother |
By michaelcahill
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Lots of fun. Is this all making sense? Great input as always. Reading every single word though I am terribly behind in responses. I apologize again. Limited access to the internet. Thrilled with the input and suggestions. Thank you!
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | This is fun to write. Fun to read? Suggestions and input are so very welcome. I listen to every word. I may not do something with a suggestion right away, but I do have it in mind and might surprise you out of the blue. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
No Bard in this chapter. I didn't want to force him in and I needed to establish some things. Besides, Lucy is a cool lady all by herself! Suggestions and input? Loving your ideas and help. Great thoughts and ideas!! Thank you. mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Still more without the Bard. But, he is coming up soon. Suggestions and input? Always most welcome. mikey |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Could use some input and suggestions. Anything at all even if it sounds a little outlandish. Thank you!!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Everyone is in the dark. Hardly anyone knows that Harpster is not dead and it is better for most of the ones that do know to keep it that way. Input and suggestions as always are sought and most appreciated. Everyone a bit scattered around. They will all be heading back towards Bel Air. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Everyone has been scattered to the winds. Trying to get them situated nearby. Suggestions and input always so very appreciated. mikey |
By michaelcahill
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Everyone is converging on the Los Angeles area. Harpster is alive, but hardly anyone knows it. Estate battles continue as though he is dead. Suggestions and input are most welcome as always. Thank you all for your help.
Sobrina-Spanish for "niece" characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
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A cat and mouse game is underway. Can you call the cops? which ones are in on it? Evidence still needs to be gathered. One false move could jeopardize many lives. Suggestions and input are always sought and given serious consideration. Your reviews have been excellent and I read each word with great interest. Some suggestions I put to use right away and others I have on the back burner for editing. Thank you for the great help. mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Will it be revealed that Blackwell is alive? Maybe it is better if everyone thinks he is dead. We'll see. Suggestions and input always listened to and sought. Every little bit helps. Wonderful thoughts and input so far. Thank you kindly.
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
What do you think of the direction this is taking. I don't want to end up in a big military situation. So, I'm hoping that our team can prevent that before it becomes necessary. Any thoughts, suggestions or input would be most appreciated.
For those unfamiliar with Star Trek: It is something that the very coolest people follow! : "Trekkies" are individuals devoted to Star Trek. "The Continuum" is a group of immortal beings that control the universe. It is where "Q" comes from. For some reason he is fascinated by humans and causes them great difficulty with his meddling. The Continuum has been known to intervene. "Q" is a character that is immortal that can alter virtually any reality. (Yes, he is a real person.) Captain Janeway is a character from the American television series "Voyager" about a spaceship marooned many years of travel from home. "Guinan" was a character that Whoopi Goldberg played as a regular guest star. She was a strange bartender aboard one of the starships with amazing insight. characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Would you like more information on the reunions? I'm trying to concentrate on the action. There has to be some background as to the planning and the whys and wherefores and that takes some time. So too would more details about the various reltionships between Harpster and Diamond, Harpster and his daughter Ruby, and even Lucy and the Bard which seems to have a few sparks developing. I plan to sprinkle more about relationships as the story moves along. I'm just not sure how much of that to include.
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Trying to keep things tied together as the pace quickens. A lot going on all of a sudden. Any input or suggestions will be considered and taken most seriously as always. Your help and advice has been wonderful. Thank you!
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Lots going on. Believable? Is it easy to follow? Loving the great input. Most appreciated. Still hopelessly behind in responses, but I read everyword and I'm sure it is reflected in the story. Thank you so much for your support.
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | The characters are in place now and the action should start to pick up. Suggestions and input always welcome. I listen with open ears to everything you say. Don't be shy. Your input is invaluable to me as is your support. Thank you so much. mikey |
By michaelcahill
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The characters are in place now and the action should start to pick up. Suggestions and input always welcome. I listen with open ears to everything you say. Don't be shy. Your input is invaluable to me as is your support. Thank you so much. mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | The characters are in place now and the action should start to pick up. Suggestions and input always welcome. I listen with open ears to everything you say. Don't be shy. Your input is invaluable to me as is your support. Thank you so much. mikey |
By michaelcahill
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Somehow the last chapter didn't have notices sent, so I hope everyone got a chance to read it. So, is this all rolling along to your liking? Input and suggestions always welcome. You have been wonderfully helpful. Thank you.
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Everything is in motion at once. Suggestions and input always sought and given serious consideration. Your help has saved me over and over. Thank you. mikey |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Everything is in motion at once. Suggestions and input always sought and given serious consideration. Your help has saved me over and over. Thank you. mikey |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | A lot of necessary set-up. Itching to see Tenaya and the Bard in action too! I am thrilled with the input. A tremendous help to be sure. Thank you. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Rolling along. Keep the suggestions coming along with advice and criticism. I listen intently. Thank you so much. |
By michaelcahill
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Everybody is in the area of Winstons Compound now. Heating up. The input is life saving, or story saving at least! Thank you so much. Maybe too many characters and angles. We'll see.
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Things are occurring at different locations simultaneously. It makes for some jumping around. I've begun each section with the location the action is taking place at. Hope that helps. Trying to get enough tied together to return the focus to the main characters and story line. Appreciate all the advice and I'm taking it to heart. This will be something that I think I can edit and maybe publish.
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Everyone getting into place. Trying to keep it moving. Who invited all these people to my story? Thanks for all the great input and advice. Trying to follow it!!
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, presumed deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnapped father and the Bard. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Well, the party is at the docks in San Pedro. Shhh. It's a surprise party. Thoughts? Input? Help? Always ready for any and all!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Okay! Now what? I obviously have a lot that needs to be written about. But, I wrote this like an ending. Should I just keep going and try to match this semi-ending? Go right to part two even though all of the questions would be from part one? Well, I guess I'll keep going unless someone has a good idea! Hahaha. The story just went this way. I know... I wrote it!! There's always editing. Don't be shy about suggestions, as you can see, I need them! Okay, this has to be the end. I'll write a sequel!! Thanks to all for their help. Mikey
characters: Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. |
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