Maiden Flight
It's definitely not National Geographic...18 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
Hello,
Greetings from the NORTH POLE. I wonder what Paul would do with my neighbor Santa if he were to get stuck in Paul's chimney. No presents for the whole family and perhaps a lawsuit. I suppose Paul's defence would be that he usually sucks and rarely blows. How did Noel Coward get into this review? - Lobber
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hello,
Greetings from the NORTH POLE. I wonder what Paul would do with my neighbor Santa if he were to get stuck in Paul's chimney. No presents for the whole family and perhaps a lawsuit. I suppose Paul's defence would be that he usually sucks and rarely blows. How did Noel Coward get into this review? - Lobber
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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LOL! So glad you seemed to enjoy writing your review for this one, sir -- you certainly make it intriguing to follow!! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by and take care!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
This short story tells of battling with chipmunks..
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
This short story tells of battling with chipmunks..
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from May 1
Wow, that's quite an interesting story. I didn't see that coming. It was really fun to read. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this entry, it's wonderfully written.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Wow, that's quite an interesting story. I didn't see that coming. It was really fun to read. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this entry, it's wonderfully written.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from May 1
Wow, that's quite an interesting story. I didn't see that coming. It was really fun to read. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this entry, it's wonderfully written.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Wow, that's quite an interesting story. I didn't see that coming. It was really fun to read. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this entry, it's wonderfully written.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Susan Larson
Oy, those chipmunks! They chewed on the bottoms of the wooden columns on our front porch. My husband very carefully and skillfully patched them with plastic wood. Then they came back and chewed the plastic. I don't know if the hose trick is animal abuse or not, but I'd live to try it!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Oy, those chipmunks! They chewed on the bottoms of the wooden columns on our front porch. My husband very carefully and skillfully patched them with plastic wood. Then they came back and chewed the plastic. I don't know if the hose trick is animal abuse or not, but I'd live to try it!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Chipmunks are too cute to do damage. I think when any woodland creature comes to town, there can be trouble. Good luck in the contest. You did a good job. Shirley
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Chipmunks are too cute to do damage. I think when any woodland creature comes to town, there can be trouble. Good luck in the contest. You did a good job. Shirley
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well written and clever story. I feel bad for the poor chipmunk. A few years ago, my husband accidentally blew a mouse across our yard with the leaf blower. He thought it was funny, but I didn't. Lol.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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This is a well written and clever story. I feel bad for the poor chipmunk. A few years ago, my husband accidentally blew a mouse across our yard with the leaf blower. He thought it was funny, but I didn't. Lol.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Mr.write_4u
Oh boy. Here comes PETA with their panties in a bunch. At least ya didn't suck em up in the vacuum. Fun story. Good read. Good luck in the contest.
Happy writing,
Larry
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Oh boy. Here comes PETA with their panties in a bunch. At least ya didn't suck em up in the vacuum. Fun story. Good read. Good luck in the contest.
Happy writing,
Larry
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from BethShelby
Ahh.... But they are such cute little creatures. The is an nice little flash fiction story. I take it your story was inspired by this picture. It sounds like an clever way to extract on from a drain spout. I wonder if it would work. A leaf blower might.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Ahh.... But they are such cute little creatures. The is an nice little flash fiction story. I take it your story was inspired by this picture. It sounds like an clever way to extract on from a drain spout. I wonder if it would work. A leaf blower might.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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It really works! Thank you for your review!
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Sound like you've tried it. Amazing.
Comment from Janet Foor
Sweet story about this little critter. I will have to tell my neighbor. They had one in their downspout and she made her husband take down the downspout to get him out. :))) He was not happy but the little guy was.
Good Story.
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Sweet story about this little critter. I will have to tell my neighbor. They had one in their downspout and she made her husband take down the downspout to get him out. :))) He was not happy but the little guy was.
Good Story.
Janet
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Lol! Thank you!