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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Just a day in a life"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This essay, Just a Day in a Life, suggests a schedule surrounding a physical therapy office manager. maybe adjusting people is included there somewhere.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This essay, Just a Day in a Life, suggests a schedule surrounding a physical therapy office manager. maybe adjusting people is included there somewhere.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Yes, thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A simple life filled with loving touches here, I am not quite sure what a cup of 'joe' is, but I expect it's a cup of coffee! Much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A simple life filled with loving touches here, I am not quite sure what a cup of 'joe' is, but I expect it's a cup of coffee! Much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Yes, a cup a Joe old American slang for a cup of coffee
Comment from Patty Palmer
You're right on with growing old isn't for sissies! Our idea of a day out is a doctor's appointment, lunch then home! The therapy appointments take longer so instead we go for supper. You wrote out a good post of a typical day!
Good luck with the contest!!!
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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You're right on with growing old isn't for sissies! Our idea of a day out is a doctor's appointment, lunch then home! The therapy appointments take longer so instead we go for supper. You wrote out a good post of a typical day!
Good luck with the contest!!!
Patty
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Patty, thank you
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. The subtitle for your story is golden. For people that get near the retirement age and their schedule gets tougher instead of easier, that day of walking away is wonderful. It looks like full days and eating while walking for you. It's an excellent story and I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Hello mystery writer. The subtitle for your story is golden. For people that get near the retirement age and their schedule gets tougher instead of easier, that day of walking away is wonderful. It looks like full days and eating while walking for you. It's an excellent story and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Robert, thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image for your story.
-I would say you did a
good job with a typical day.
-I can relate to bones, as well
as muscles, aching in the morning!
-The imagery in the opening
paragraph is very good.
-The ending of your day
sounds a bit hectic except
for reading and sleeping!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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-Nice image for your story.
-I would say you did a
good job with a typical day.
-I can relate to bones, as well
as muscles, aching in the morning!
-The imagery in the opening
paragraph is very good.
-The ending of your day
sounds a bit hectic except
for reading and sleeping!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Pam, I thank you!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Rikki66
Luck with this prompt. I accept your count. This could be my typical day, except for the coffee, never acquired a taste for the stuff. I seem that every day I have some type of appointment. I hurt even before getting out of bed.
RikkiLXXIII
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Luck with this prompt. I accept your count. This could be my typical day, except for the coffee, never acquired a taste for the stuff. I seem that every day I have some type of appointment. I hurt even before getting out of bed.
RikkiLXXIII
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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I appreciate your review and comments.
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you are welcome it was my pleasure to read
rikki
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written hundred word story of a typical day in life. The older we get we do everything routinely over and over. If we don't set a certain time for everything we will probably forget to drink our pills.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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A very well-written hundred word story of a typical day in life. The older we get we do everything routinely over and over. If we don't set a certain time for everything we will probably forget to drink our pills.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Sandra, I thank you. Yes the pills, the pills the pills.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the A Typical Day writing prompt.
This short verse tells of a typical day in the life of the author.
I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the A Typical Day writing prompt.
This short verse tells of a typical day in the life of the author.
I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Sharon, thanks much!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with the typical day rendered in only 100 words. You got your day off to the right start with the cuppa Joe. Thanks for sharing this for the contest.
Bill
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Great job with the typical day rendered in only 100 words. You got your day off to the right start with the cuppa Joe. Thanks for sharing this for the contest.
Bill
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks Bill, as you know life is just that, life~
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Every time I read something related to how the body ages and reacts when you get older man it disturbs me. Hopefully I have at least a couple of good decades ahead of me without worrying about these things!
I liked your story in 100 words and think it is a pretty good entry. Best of luck! Cheers
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Every time I read something related to how the body ages and reacts when you get older man it disturbs me. Hopefully I have at least a couple of good decades ahead of me without worrying about these things!
I liked your story in 100 words and think it is a pretty good entry. Best of luck! Cheers
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Aaqib, life is real, real! My wife fell three months ago and fractured her femur on a leg that had just had a hip replacement and in the same fall fractured her left wrist. Both fractures required extensive surgery. Ergo, the need for all these crazy follow-ups. Just living life!
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Ouch! That was crazy what happened. Like a chain of bad events one after the other. My father fell from the stairs a week ago and fractured a couple of toes but your wife was probably low on luck that day. Best wishes to you and your wife!