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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am glad Charles stood up for himself, although he really doesn't have a choice. I do like the idea of him seeing Helen again. I have a feeling there will be a different outcome. At least I hope so.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I am glad Charles stood up for himself, although he really doesn't have a choice. I do like the idea of him seeing Helen again. I have a feeling there will be a different outcome. At least I hope so.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Very many thanks for the sixth star! I shall try to arrange a romantic reunion between Charles and Helen!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
excellent chapter, Tony.
-I like Charles's resurgence
of courage and determination.
-I can't blame him for not
wanting to be suckered
into a scheme he knows
nothing about and being
blackmailed on top of it.
-He got rid of his "shadow,"
and secured the items he
didn't want anyone to get
their hands on.
-It was also smart on his part
to call Bamforth, and establish
things on his own terms.
-He decides to give Bamforth a
chance, and he certainly doesn't
want to be bossed around by Jeanne.
-The conclusion is also very good,
and keeps that envelope in the forefront.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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-Good image and
excellent chapter, Tony.
-I like Charles's resurgence
of courage and determination.
-I can't blame him for not
wanting to be suckered
into a scheme he knows
nothing about and being
blackmailed on top of it.
-He got rid of his "shadow,"
and secured the items he
didn't want anyone to get
their hands on.
-It was also smart on his part
to call Bamforth, and establish
things on his own terms.
-He decides to give Bamforth a
chance, and he certainly doesn't
want to be bossed around by Jeanne.
-The conclusion is also very good,
and keeps that envelope in the forefront.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanks very much for the sixth star, Pam, and for your comments about the chapter. Much appreciated. All the best, Tony
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You are very welcome and deserving, Tony.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Tony, when I read chapter 52 I had a vague feeling that I was missing something. Now I know why. I never read this superb chapter. Now all is clear and I'm sorry about my mistake. I found one minor thing:
which eventually narrows and becomes a pedestrian access to a stairway leading to the Sacré-Coeur funicular railway. = which eventually narrowed and became a pedestrian ... railway. You changed tense from past to present. I love the story. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hi Tony, when I read chapter 52 I had a vague feeling that I was missing something. Now I know why. I never read this superb chapter. Now all is clear and I'm sorry about my mistake. I found one minor thing:
which eventually narrows and becomes a pedestrian access to a stairway leading to the Sacré-Coeur funicular railway. = which eventually narrowed and became a pedestrian ... railway. You changed tense from past to present. I love the story. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Very many thanks for the sixth star, Ulla - and for your suggested amendment. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lead a horse to water and let him think it was his idea, and then of course there's the Helen lure reeling him in. Another good chapter Tony,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Lead a horse to water and let him think it was his idea, and then of course there's the Helen lure reeling him in. Another good chapter Tony,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Valda. He certainly seems to have got himself hooked.
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Tony;
> Fascinating you should use the situation that Charles is being blackmailed and forced to do something he doesn't want to do by a government's MI6.
> And you brought it up again when I heard a comedian talk about the fact when you're blackmailed by the government is like having a hook stuck up your bum and if you not going to use me as bait, then take it out. Chuckle!
>So is Mme. Durand is a piece of work And Charles is found out, that obviously, She's not following the rules that David was playing with And David actually probably saying that it was like they had just tested his metal. I don't think so?
> thanks for sharing, Tony and take care and have a good one.
Alx
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Cheers, Tony;
> Fascinating you should use the situation that Charles is being blackmailed and forced to do something he doesn't want to do by a government's MI6.
> And you brought it up again when I heard a comedian talk about the fact when you're blackmailed by the government is like having a hook stuck up your bum and if you not going to use me as bait, then take it out. Chuckle!
>So is Mme. Durand is a piece of work And Charles is found out, that obviously, She's not following the rules that David was playing with And David actually probably saying that it was like they had just tested his metal. I don't think so?
> thanks for sharing, Tony and take care and have a good one.
Alx
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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I was entertained by the comments in your review, Alx - especially the one about being hooked! Thanks very much. All the best to you and your family, Tony
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Thanks Tony take care and have a go to my friend.
Alx
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Oh, by the way, stay on top when you're ever down under. Chuckle!
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Oh, by the way, stay on top when you're ever down under. Chuckle!
Comment from JudyE
I enjoyed this chapter and didn't find anything that needed fixing and I don't have any suggestions to make. In about a month we'll be staying in an apartment very close to Notre Dame Cathedral. Lucky us, don't you think? I'll keep an eye out for spies. :)
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed this chapter and didn't find anything that needed fixing and I don't have any suggestions to make. In about a month we'll be staying in an apartment very close to Notre Dame Cathedral. Lucky us, don't you think? I'll keep an eye out for spies. :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Thanks very much for your review and for the sixth star. Much appreciated! Enjoy your trip to Paris. Devastating news about the cathedral, but it seems possible that much of it will be saved and that restoration will be possible. Happy Easter to you. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent chapter, More, please. I am enjoying reading this story and I'm always ready for more. You did a great job and I didn't see anything to recommend. Have a great day. Shirley
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Excellent chapter, More, please. I am enjoying reading this story and I'm always ready for more. You did a great job and I didn't see anything to recommend. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Many thanks for your review of The Worm Turns last week. Much appreciated. Happy Easter, Shirley. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from damommy
Good for Charles, taking a stand. I don't for one minute believe anything Bamforth promises. I'm glad the painting is safe, and I hope Charles is very careful at that meeting. A lot has happened in a week or two!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Good for Charles, taking a stand. I don't for one minute believe anything Bamforth promises. I'm glad the painting is safe, and I hope Charles is very careful at that meeting. A lot has happened in a week or two!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your review of Chapter 51, The Worm Turns, Yvonne - nearly a week ago. I?m a little late in responding, I?m afraid, but no less appreciated for that! All the best, Tony.
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Never worry about being late. I know how busy one can be, and I don't keep tabs. 8-)
Comment from S.M.E.Schultz
Hooray for Charles! Starting to plan on the offensive instead of reacting to the situation. Would liked to have read further into the story but I will wait patiently for the next chapter!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Hooray for Charles! Starting to plan on the offensive instead of reacting to the situation. Would liked to have read further into the story but I will wait patiently for the next chapter!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your review of Chapter 51, The Worm Turns - nearly a week ago. I?m a little late in responding, I?m afraid, but no less appreciated for that! All the best, Tony.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yes!! Well done, Tony, I loved it that you got one over on them, and you have the painting safely in the bank. Now to find out what it is they want you to do. They might have you by the balls, but you have just given theirs a little squeeze!! lol. Loved this one. I found a little missing 'o' below. That's all, you never have much wrong, I wish mine could be as clean as yours. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Most of the houses ab(o)ut the
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Yes!! Well done, Tony, I loved it that you got one over on them, and you have the painting safely in the bank. Now to find out what it is they want you to do. They might have you by the balls, but you have just given theirs a little squeeze!! lol. Loved this one. I found a little missing 'o' below. That's all, you never have much wrong, I wish mine could be as clean as yours. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Most of the houses ab(o)ut the
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your review of Chapter 51, The Worm Turns, Sandra - nearly a week ago. I?m a little late in responding, I?m afraid, but no less appreciated for that! All the best, Tony.