Perennials of War
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written I liked the way you bring the situation of dressing correctly to Emily gently by her father the presentation is great I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Yes my friend this is well written I liked the way you bring the situation of dressing correctly to Emily gently by her father the presentation is great I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm sorry to hear you've been ill. I hope you're doing better.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I can see how you know of how a five year old girl want to dress like her Mom. What I liked is how you wrote of how Shana explained to Emily what different types of clothing people wear. Then I addressed different types of clothes that are appropriate for certain events.
I take it the abuse that Patricia went through will be next (or has it been told in one of your past chapters?
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Hello Barb
I can see how you know of how a five year old girl want to dress like her Mom. What I liked is how you wrote of how Shana explained to Emily what different types of clothing people wear. Then I addressed different types of clothes that are appropriate for certain events.
I take it the abuse that Patricia went through will be next (or has it been told in one of your past chapters?
Gert
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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It hasn't been told and I'm not sure how much of it I will go into. It doesn't really move the story along; just that it happened. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Hi Barbara.... I've been off of here for awhile... not feeling well. But, I'm back and hope to get back into the swing of things. I enjoyed this chapter. I haven't read the others but this was quite interesting. I did read your info on the characters, which was enlightening. I can definitely see a 5 yr old wanting to look like their Momma... appropriate or not. It seems like she might understand what was explained to her about how to dress, and be treated, like a lady. I got the feeling that Anderson Sharp wants everyone to do everything for him.... his money talks... and that he should probably take a more personal interest in his daughter and her needing his actualy.... loving... attention. Might be wrong on that, but that's what came to me as I read this small part of the chapter. I always love your work. Great to be reading it again. Gramalot8
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Hi Barbara.... I've been off of here for awhile... not feeling well. But, I'm back and hope to get back into the swing of things. I enjoyed this chapter. I haven't read the others but this was quite interesting. I did read your info on the characters, which was enlightening. I can definitely see a 5 yr old wanting to look like their Momma... appropriate or not. It seems like she might understand what was explained to her about how to dress, and be treated, like a lady. I got the feeling that Anderson Sharp wants everyone to do everything for him.... his money talks... and that he should probably take a more personal interest in his daughter and her needing his actualy.... loving... attention. Might be wrong on that, but that's what came to me as I read this small part of the chapter. I always love your work. Great to be reading it again. Gramalot8
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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I think your opinion will somewhat change as we get to know Anderson more. LOL Thank you for the kind review. I hope you're doing better.
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Thanks, Barbara, I am feeling better. Yes, I will have to learn more about your Anderson Sharp. Jerri
Comment from Sasha
Lovely work with this chapter. Children are so complicated and need gentle handling when in difficult situations. I think Shana handled this very well and I agree, she definitely needs counseling to discuss the abuse she has witnessed.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Lovely work with this chapter. Children are so complicated and need gentle handling when in difficult situations. I think Shana handled this very well and I agree, she definitely needs counseling to discuss the abuse she has witnessed.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from teols2016
Another intriguing installment. Perhaps the ex-wife isn't all bad. Hopefully Emily only saw the abuse and wasn't a victim herself. Hopefully a therapist can help her. I look forward to seeing if my desires become reality. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Another intriguing installment. Perhaps the ex-wife isn't all bad. Hopefully Emily only saw the abuse and wasn't a victim herself. Hopefully a therapist can help her. I look forward to seeing if my desires become reality. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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I can't wait to get the whole story. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A well written piece and a snippet of the story and not quite sure where it is going, but I must read your previous work for the story so far! Intriguing, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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A well written piece and a snippet of the story and not quite sure where it is going, but I must read your previous work for the story so far! Intriguing, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good chapter. You can learn so much about parents by speaking to their kids, as you know from being a teacher. If parents only knew some of the secrets their kids give away... LOL!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Good chapter. You can learn so much about parents by speaking to their kids, as you know from being a teacher. If parents only knew some of the secrets their kids give away... LOL!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Oh so true. If parents only knew....Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
This is a creative post and I enjoyed the presentation. I can not wait to read the next post of this story. Thanks again for sharing this with the fanstory community. HUGS.......
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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This is a creative post and I enjoyed the presentation. I can not wait to read the next post of this story. Thanks again for sharing this with the fanstory community. HUGS.......
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Barbara.
"Emily leaped from her bed and took it from him. "My party dress! Did it come with shoes?" ( Hahahaha! Well played.)
"I'm not sure Shana's had experience with headstrong young girls." (I have now. Champers is 9yo and can be very strong-headed.)
Some great advice for the kid there. Sadly, it is true of so many.
Another great chapter, my friend.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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G'day Barbara.
"Emily leaped from her bed and took it from him. "My party dress! Did it come with shoes?" ( Hahahaha! Well played.)
"I'm not sure Shana's had experience with headstrong young girls." (I have now. Champers is 9yo and can be very strong-headed.)
Some great advice for the kid there. Sadly, it is true of so many.
Another great chapter, my friend.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Curly Girly
In this sad chapter we read that Emily has been shown a poor example of womanhood by her mother. Emily is only five and no longer wishes to look cute, she wishes to look like an adult party girl. Fortunately, they were able to settle on the dress, but with heels. I hope she can walk in them!
Nicole
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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In this sad chapter we read that Emily has been shown a poor example of womanhood by her mother. Emily is only five and no longer wishes to look cute, she wishes to look like an adult party girl. Fortunately, they were able to settle on the dress, but with heels. I hope she can walk in them!
Nicole
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Jane shot the heels down. LOL Thank you for the kind review.