Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Chapter One part Drei"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
After a silence, he let go of her hand, "I'm done," and began to walk away. - Yes Anderson, keep going while you're still in your right mind.
Well if you're gonna get yourself kidnapped, going with a zillionaire ain't to shabby. That said I so see shades of Paige in Shana. She is so inconsistent a character I want to slap her one (ugh). Anderson should have taken my advice, and got while the getting was good. Of course this would be a very short read. Not sure I'd want that.
Well thanks again for giving me another aggravating and engaging read. LOL
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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After a silence, he let go of her hand, "I'm done," and began to walk away. - Yes Anderson, keep going while you're still in your right mind.
Well if you're gonna get yourself kidnapped, going with a zillionaire ain't to shabby. That said I so see shades of Paige in Shana. She is so inconsistent a character I want to slap her one (ugh). Anderson should have taken my advice, and got while the getting was good. Of course this would be a very short read. Not sure I'd want that.
Well thanks again for giving me another aggravating and engaging read. LOL
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Lol I'm not sure aggravating you is a good thing, is it???? Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Delahay
I already got the impression from the first chapter I read, the last one, that this man is quite wealthy.Of course this is fiction so such things you are writing about could happen but I don't think there are many wealthy knights in shining armor around.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016
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I already got the impression from the first chapter I read, the last one, that this man is quite wealthy.Of course this is fiction so such things you are writing about could happen but I don't think there are many wealthy knights in shining armor around.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016
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I agree. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
Good Moring, my dear. I hope you had a very nice Holiday. I am pleased to see a new novel. I was not able to finish your last one and a few others. Been busy with our business and have been out of Fanstory. Now I can catch up. Hopefully a little every day. I miss it so much. My you guys very much too.
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Good Moring, my dear. I hope you had a very nice Holiday. I am pleased to see a new novel. I was not able to finish your last one and a few others. Been busy with our business and have been out of Fanstory. Now I can catch up. Hopefully a little every day. I miss it so much. My you guys very much too.
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for your support.
Comment from Jackarrie
I am intrigued and enjoyed the beginning of the story. I also like romances with suspense. I hope to follow the story, I don't normally read them because of my eyes not great, but I believe I am hooked.
Well done
mary
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016
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I am intrigued and enjoyed the beginning of the story. I also like romances with suspense. I hope to follow the story, I don't normally read them because of my eyes not great, but I believe I am hooked.
Well done
mary
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Jay Squires
Well now, I remember downloading this several days ago, but am surprised to see I hadn't reviewed it. A good chapter, Barbara. Shana has a lot of the same characteristics as your last character, vis-a-vis, men, though it's a little early to say that: she has every right to be distrusting of someone wanting to take her to his home. I do like this plot, though. Sounds like it's going to be loaded with intrigue as well as romance.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016
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Well now, I remember downloading this several days ago, but am surprised to see I hadn't reviewed it. A good chapter, Barbara. Shana has a lot of the same characteristics as your last character, vis-a-vis, men, though it's a little early to say that: she has every right to be distrusting of someone wanting to take her to his home. I do like this plot, though. Sounds like it's going to be loaded with intrigue as well as romance.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016
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I am hoping Shana comes off softer than Soni, but capable of being strong when need be. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
So far the book has been interesting so you have my attention. I will be glad to read more of the book. You talk about a dog but I didn't read about one so I assume it is coming. =} I do like dogs better than cats. I'm allergic to them. Hope you have a good Thanksgiving. Rox
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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So far the book has been interesting so you have my attention. I will be glad to read more of the book. You talk about a dog but I didn't read about one so I assume it is coming. =} I do like dogs better than cats. I'm allergic to them. Hope you have a good Thanksgiving. Rox
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review. Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from LyricaLyre
Nice dialogue going on their!!!! I also really liked the name "Shana", it was very unique. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Nice dialogue going on their!!!! I also really liked the name "Shana", it was very unique. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Shana is a traditional Jewish female name. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh my, indeed! I never had rich men come to my aid! Oh, well, too late now. I know I'm being a doubting Thomas, but I still wonder about him. He is probably a real knight in shining armour, we will soon see. Those three men, they obviously know who Shana is, and what she's after, but how? The plot thickens, and it's very intriguing! Excellent writing, Barbara, and it's looks like it's going to be a wonderful book! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Oh my, indeed! I never had rich men come to my aid! Oh, well, too late now. I know I'm being a doubting Thomas, but I still wonder about him. He is probably a real knight in shining armour, we will soon see. Those three men, they obviously know who Shana is, and what she's after, but how? The plot thickens, and it's very intriguing! Excellent writing, Barbara, and it's looks like it's going to be a wonderful book! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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I've never had a rich man come to my aid either, but one can wish. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent chapter, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where shana is forced to turn to anderson for his help, though she is scared to go home with it. i enjoyed reading this one. made me smile
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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this is an excellent chapter, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where shana is forced to turn to anderson for his help, though she is scared to go home with it. i enjoyed reading this one. made me smile
Comment Written 22-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from MelB
I understand Shana being in this position. It's hard to trust this guy, but I think he's the only shot she's got to get away from the ones following her. A good fake out and a good reason to get close to her if he's attracted to her, which I think he is.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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I understand Shana being in this position. It's hard to trust this guy, but I think he's the only shot she's got to get away from the ones following her. A good fake out and a good reason to get close to her if he's attracted to her, which I think he is.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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I think he's attracted too. LOL Thank you for the kind review.