Perennials of War
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Premise seems intriguing and the list of characters allows insight into who they are and what they are about.
Genocide, theft of family heirlooms. Makings for much interest in the plot of the book.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Premise seems intriguing and the list of characters allows insight into who they are and what they are about.
Genocide, theft of family heirlooms. Makings for much interest in the plot of the book.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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This book is now published. YEAH!! Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Ok Barbara: First you hooked me with Cash & Paige, now you're gonna get me with Anderson & Shana (I can feel it). I love the character and potential theme of this novel. Let's see what kind of ride I'm in for this time.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Ok Barbara: First you hooked me with Cash & Paige, now you're gonna get me with Anderson & Shana (I can feel it). I love the character and potential theme of this novel. Let's see what kind of ride I'm in for this time.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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I hope you enjoy.
Comment from Delahay
I did not know that anyone was sent to Dachau on Kristallnacht. I thought that was when Jewish businesses and other buildings were vandalized. I knew Jews were also killed at the time but did no know many were sent to concentration camps at that time.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016
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I did not know that anyone was sent to Dachau on Kristallnacht. I thought that was when Jewish businesses and other buildings were vandalized. I knew Jews were also killed at the time but did no know many were sent to concentration camps at that time.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016
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Many were sent to Dachau during Kristallnact. It was pretty much the beginning of the Holocaust. Some happened before,, though.
Comment from judiverse
This sounds like a wonderful idea. You've surely done a lot of research on art theft by the Nazis and the Jewish families during WWII. Shana promises to be a fascinating character, possibly headstrong. The historical background the family roots in Germany should be interesting, too. Go ahead and let Shana have a cat. A neighbor can always look in on it. You're off to a good start, and best of luck with your work on this novel. judi
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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This sounds like a wonderful idea. You've surely done a lot of research on art theft by the Nazis and the Jewish families during WWII. Shana promises to be a fascinating character, possibly headstrong. The historical background the family roots in Germany should be interesting, too. Go ahead and let Shana have a cat. A neighbor can always look in on it. You're off to a good start, and best of luck with your work on this novel. judi
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from barleygirl
It's not so much that one would read this for entertainment or pleasure . . . maybe you intended to pique interest in your upcoming efforts to flesh out this novel, chapter by chapter . . . but for me, the great value is just in seeing how a writer that's experienced in crafting longer works starts the ball rolling. I cannot fathom how it's done, so it's nice to see the process as well as the actual finished pieces. I've always been fascinated by all kinds of artists who share their processes.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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It's not so much that one would read this for entertainment or pleasure . . . maybe you intended to pique interest in your upcoming efforts to flesh out this novel, chapter by chapter . . . but for me, the great value is just in seeing how a writer that's experienced in crafting longer works starts the ball rolling. I cannot fathom how it's done, so it's nice to see the process as well as the actual finished pieces. I've always been fascinated by all kinds of artists who share their processes.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement. I am hoping people will read for pleasure and the excitement.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi
I have just caught the beginning a new book, I hope to read. It is my new plan to read more stories because up to now I have only concentrated on poems and short posts. (eye not great) So your story sounds so interesting, I will keep an eye out for it and I a hope to keep up with it. Mary
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Hi
I have just caught the beginning a new book, I hope to read. It is my new plan to read more stories because up to now I have only concentrated on poems and short posts. (eye not great) So your story sounds so interesting, I will keep an eye out for it and I a hope to keep up with it. Mary
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement. I post on Sunday afternoon's.
Comment from MelB
I'm intrigued by this story. For some reason, anything that deals with the Holocaust or the Nazis draws the reader into the story. Some amazing stories came out of that time. It's also hard to believe that such sheer evil exists and did during that time also.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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I'm intrigued by this story. For some reason, anything that deals with the Holocaust or the Nazis draws the reader into the story. Some amazing stories came out of that time. It's also hard to believe that such sheer evil exists and did during that time also.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're welcome. Look forward to reading more.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
This looks like a great story plot with a wonderful cast of characters.
As you know, Marilyn's Novel, "The Masterpiece"a;so revolves around a valuable Dutch painting, Nazi art thrift and art forgery. Unfortunately Marilyn will be unable to complete due to failing health. I am posting a short note about her illness which will be distributed to her fans tonight, I plan to complete her work.
I will review your novel and apply my knowledge in any way I can help.
You have my love ns Irush Hugs as you continue,
Roger
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Hi Barbara:)
This looks like a great story plot with a wonderful cast of characters.
As you know, Marilyn's Novel, "The Masterpiece"a;so revolves around a valuable Dutch painting, Nazi art thrift and art forgery. Unfortunately Marilyn will be unable to complete due to failing health. I am posting a short note about her illness which will be distributed to her fans tonight, I plan to complete her work.
I will review your novel and apply my knowledge in any way I can help.
You have my love ns Irush Hugs as you continue,
Roger
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement. I always appreciate hearing from you. I value your comments.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Yes, you are right; but it's a must to follow and enjoy the story.
Waiting for the coming part, and best of luck!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Yes, you are right; but it's a must to follow and enjoy the story.
Waiting for the coming part, and best of luck!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from elloramen
As you stated, this is hard to review because it is merely the fabric of an idea. However, having taught the Diary of Anne Frank to jr high students, I am familiar with this era of history in broad terms. I find the premise interesting because the focus is on "rescuing" art as opposed to what most stories tend to focus on, which is the atrocities of concentration camps, ghettos, and the actual battles. There is still art out there that the Nazis stole that has never been recovered. I think you face a couple of big challenges. One is bridging the stories of three generations, and two is the historical accuracy. You took on a big idea. Your notes do not show how Anderson and Shana are connected. I also was confused by "former Nazi ancestors." Ancestors to whom? It is an intriguing idea, and I am sure it will begin to take on a life of its own as you write through it.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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As you stated, this is hard to review because it is merely the fabric of an idea. However, having taught the Diary of Anne Frank to jr high students, I am familiar with this era of history in broad terms. I find the premise interesting because the focus is on "rescuing" art as opposed to what most stories tend to focus on, which is the atrocities of concentration camps, ghettos, and the actual battles. There is still art out there that the Nazis stole that has never been recovered. I think you face a couple of big challenges. One is bridging the stories of three generations, and two is the historical accuracy. You took on a big idea. Your notes do not show how Anderson and Shana are connected. I also was confused by "former Nazi ancestors." Ancestors to whom? It is an intriguing idea, and I am sure it will begin to take on a life of its own as you write through it.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement. I will show in the first chapter how Shana and Anderson connect, I miss wrote Nazi ancestors. I will get that corrected. 'Descendants of former Nazis who want to retain their priceless art collections.'