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Lost

Flash Fiction Entry

6 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This story, Lost, has a funny separation tale that fortunately ends well with the rejoining through the celebrating howls of the ladies and the expected corrections from the wife, Funny.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
    Your retort is as humorous as my tale, which has me ask if a tale can be true or only fictitious, which the story isn't. Thanks, Bill.
    Next release... "To Assay or Not Assay" is set to debut today.
    Stay tuned.
Comment from Gayla putnam
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Some of your sentences are so descriptive. I loved the bright canary sweatshirt that chirped visually as much as the singing named bird does vocally. I thought the oo-la-la and ruh roh added so much to the cadence of the piece. You caught the panic and the humor in your piece. gayla

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
    haha - aha - I captured a moment or two for you. That's good. Thanks for the read and comment.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is quite well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a lovely day and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
    I appreciate your kind words, but even more for the spiritual blessing. May the God of the world give heed and yield additionally to you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Being tall most definitely helps in a crowd, especially when there is something we want to see over the top of all those heads! You made me smile with this realistic and well thought out story, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
    Thanks as always
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I had such a fun time reading your story! The whole situation with the lost husband rushing around and the race to meet the family had me on the edge of my seat. I loved the humor you added. I could just imagine the family's relief when they finally found each other. You really captured the excitement and stress of travel - all while keeping it entertaining. Great job!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
    Thank you. It could not have happened to a real guy, right?
Comment from RodG
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I can imagine the father's panic when he got separated from his family in an unfamiliar place like the Vatican. I especially like your last two paragraphs which SHOW us how he reconnects with his family. Rod

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
    Ce la vie tho I don t know what that means
    Thanks for the read and comment
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
    Ce la vie tho I don t know what that means
    Thanks for the read and comment