Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Ye ha, now I'm getting ready to witness Allen's major beatdown at the hands of Cord, what he's deserved since day one. Now, I just hope that something doesn't get in the way. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Ye ha, now I'm getting ready to witness Allen's major beatdown at the hands of Cord, what he's deserved since day one. Now, I just hope that something doesn't get in the way. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I can promise Alan will not be happy with the outcome.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm glad to see how the animals are involved in this scene with the dogs rescuing Ali and the horses interacting with the people. I wasn't sure why Ali originally headed to the house but then didn't want to explain her injuries. I hope she won't lie to Cord since they have the fight on video. Hope the video will be used in the trial and Ali does press charges!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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I'm glad to see how the animals are involved in this scene with the dogs rescuing Ali and the horses interacting with the people. I wasn't sure why Ali originally headed to the house but then didn't want to explain her injuries. I hope she won't lie to Cord since they have the fight on video. Hope the video will be used in the trial and Ali does press charges!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Ali tells the truth, and a few questions will be answered. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Nothing appears bizarre, let Alan do anything, the mode of reaction is not unfair on part of Alexandra; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Nothing appears bizarre, let Alan do anything, the mode of reaction is not unfair on part of Alexandra; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from irishauthorme
Wow, an action chapter!
Well written and fast-moving.
Good tension and a great character portrait of Allen Griffin. He was never in love with Ali, she was a possession and a route to his advancement.
Have known some people like this is real life, scum bags with no conscience, using other people to better themselves.
Come to think of it, we have some elected officials who fit the description.
Great chapter!
irish
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Wow, an action chapter!
Well written and fast-moving.
Good tension and a great character portrait of Allen Griffin. He was never in love with Ali, she was a possession and a route to his advancement.
Have known some people like this is real life, scum bags with no conscience, using other people to better themselves.
Come to think of it, we have some elected officials who fit the description.
Great chapter!
irish
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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LOL. So true about our elected officials. They seem to get by with whatever. I can promise Alan will pay, but is it enough? Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
An action packed chapter. You started this off with a bang as Alan tries to drag of Alex, and the details of his punching and dragging her, her kicking him, put us right there as witnesses to the struggle. Cord goes after her and finds her, but it is clear here they have a ways to go to be rid of the determined bad guy here. You set the stage for more suspense and created an unsettling mood, an uneven terraine ahead for us to cross...estory
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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An action packed chapter. You started this off with a bang as Alan tries to drag of Alex, and the details of his punching and dragging her, her kicking him, put us right there as witnesses to the struggle. Cord goes after her and finds her, but it is clear here they have a ways to go to be rid of the determined bad guy here. You set the stage for more suspense and created an unsettling mood, an uneven terraine ahead for us to cross...estory
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the encouraging review. Alan will return in a few weeks.
Comment from Sanku
Alan must be psycho case ..to think that Ali would go back if he used force. The chapter was very well written with tension mounting till Ali was found..I know Cord is not going to keep quiet.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Alan must be psycho case ..to think that Ali would go back if he used force. The chapter was very well written with tension mounting till Ali was found..I know Cord is not going to keep quiet.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Alan gets even worse in a few weeks.
Comment from Karyn2
Hi there! I enjoyed what I read very much. I think you have a strong plot with some interesting characters. The slap took me quite by surprise which is probably the intention! I would like greater description of what she felt physically and emotionally from this sudden abuse. We know her hand moved to her face but did it sting? was she surprised, afraid? What thoughts and feelings raced through her mind?
I feel the same with the kissing scene when she was found. I would love to enter their worlds, minds and emotions more to live it and feel it as a reader. Some good bones to work with!
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Hi there! I enjoyed what I read very much. I think you have a strong plot with some interesting characters. The slap took me quite by surprise which is probably the intention! I would like greater description of what she felt physically and emotionally from this sudden abuse. We know her hand moved to her face but did it sting? was she surprised, afraid? What thoughts and feelings raced through her mind?
I feel the same with the kissing scene when she was found. I would love to enter their worlds, minds and emotions more to live it and feel it as a reader. Some good bones to work with!
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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I added she felt the sting to her face. Not sure about the kiss. I think the words cover it since it's during a storm. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
This just keeps getting better and better. A great storyline as far as I
can see. I have to go back and read more. The flow is so smooth with no awkard moments.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This just keeps getting better and better. A great storyline as far as I
can see. I have to go back and read more. The flow is so smooth with no awkard moments.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Alan was worse than I expected. You did a great job of mounting the tension with Ali riding off when she was in no condition to do so, the horse coming back without her, and the cameras showing Alan beating her. Since it came so easily to him, I suspect he hurt her like that a few times during their engagement. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Alan was worse than I expected. You did a great job of mounting the tension with Ali riding off when she was in no condition to do so, the horse coming back without her, and the cameras showing Alan beating her. Since it came so easily to him, I suspect he hurt her like that a few times during their engagement. Excellent job!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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We'll find out more next week. Alan gets even worse as you'll see in a few weeks. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
This is a tense, suspenseful chapter, Barbara. I wish Alan had fallen down and the dogs had done a better job on him. A bitten leg didn't seem enough, but I know that sooner or later he and Cord will have it out and there will be redemption for Ali. Another great job.
Jay
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This is a tense, suspenseful chapter, Barbara. I wish Alan had fallen down and the dogs had done a better job on him. A bitten leg didn't seem enough, but I know that sooner or later he and Cord will have it out and there will be redemption for Ali. Another great job.
Jay
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.