Quiet Lawyer
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32 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
Love this book. It is very believable. You did a great job as always. I'm ready for more of it to read. I didn't see any errors to tell you about. I hope you had a great Thanksgiving. Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Love this book. It is very believable. You did a great job as always. I'm ready for more of it to read. I didn't see any errors to tell you about. I hope you had a great Thanksgiving. Shirley
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review, I hope you had a blessed Thanksgiving.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Fine, fantastic, realistic, this is a short chapter, orderly taletelling is the meeting I enjoyed the read; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Fine, fantastic, realistic, this is a short chapter, orderly taletelling is the meeting I enjoyed the read; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Short chapter compared to what you wrote earlier. I had to return to the notes to see who Joseph and Ruth are, the couple in this story; are they also involved with Alan? (Are they jewelry shop owners with Alan)?
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Short chapter compared to what you wrote earlier. I had to return to the notes to see who Joseph and Ruth are, the couple in this story; are they also involved with Alan? (Are they jewelry shop owners with Alan)?
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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No, Alan is a lawyer. He wants to work at the same law firm Ali's family owns. That's why he wanted to marry her. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Have a blessed I.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This chapter was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Have a blessed I.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
This is one of your shortest chapters yet, but the writing is just as outstanding as all the others and leaves readers waiting for what's to come next. Happy Thanksgiving! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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This is one of your shortest chapters yet, but the writing is just as outstanding as all the others and leaves readers waiting for what's to come next. Happy Thanksgiving! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. The next few are longer, and my readers needed the information. It I posted with them, they would have been too long.
Comment from Ben Colder
I have missed so much of your story that I can not appreciate it as I should. Your writing always has a good flow which I have been adapting for a long time.
Thanks for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I have missed so much of your story that I can not appreciate it as I should. Your writing always has a good flow which I have been adapting for a long time.
Thanks for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reviewing. I'm so glad you're back.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I think it's good that Ali joined the conversation. It seems like people like Alan never stop. I wonder what will happen next. Probably continue to be obnoxious.
Well done, Barbara.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I think it's good that Ali joined the conversation. It seems like people like Alan never stop. I wonder what will happen next. Probably continue to be obnoxious.
Well done, Barbara.
Gypsy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Alan will show his worst side in Sunday's post. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Is it "Joseph Aaron" as listed in Previously or "Joseph Aaronson" as listed in Paragraph 4 "meeting with Joseph Aaronson"?
"Alan" was pretty brazen to claim to be a new unannounced partner in the law firm.
Good thing Alexandra set the record straight.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Is it "Joseph Aaron" as listed in Previously or "Joseph Aaronson" as listed in Paragraph 4 "meeting with Joseph Aaronson"?
"Alan" was pretty brazen to claim to be a new unannounced partner in the law firm.
Good thing Alexandra set the record straight.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I will make that correction. Thank you for the catch.
I appreciate it. Alan will return in Sunday's post and show how horrible he really is. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from irishauthorme
Good, fast-moving chapter.
There is a certain satisfaction, in seeing Alan get what was coming to him, although it is just a story. I get wrapped up in the characters, you make them come to life.
It is hard to heal from being deceived, we tend to blame ourselves for being so gullible.
Good work,
irish
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Good, fast-moving chapter.
There is a certain satisfaction, in seeing Alan get what was coming to him, although it is just a story. I get wrapped up in the characters, you make them come to life.
It is hard to heal from being deceived, we tend to blame ourselves for being so gullible.
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Alan will return in Sunday's post and show how horrible he really is. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
This is a pretty short post that illustrates how Cord and Alex are supporting each other; at least how he is deffering and supportive of her. He gives her that hug, he leans over and kisses her; we see he is completely swept away. Alex comes across as the victim of more intrigue here, but we have seen how tough she can be and we get a sense she is ready to move on. estory
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This is a pretty short post that illustrates how Cord and Alex are supporting each other; at least how he is deffering and supportive of her. He gives her that hug, he leans over and kisses her; we see he is completely swept away. Alex comes across as the victim of more intrigue here, but we have seen how tough she can be and we get a sense she is ready to move on. estory
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Alan will return in Sunday's post and show how horrible he really is. Thank you for the kind review.