Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
No problems with the font size, Barbara. This was an excellent chapter in the story. I missed it! Now, what is that creep Alan up to? He's obviously got something in that deranged head of his. I'm glad Cord is with her, and I hope that Ali will soon make her mind up to stay with Cord on the ranch. She doesn't like the city, she fits in so well in the countryside. Well, he nearly got that first kiss, but was scared of the consequences. I think she was, too. Excellent, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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No problems with the font size, Barbara. This was an excellent chapter in the story. I missed it! Now, what is that creep Alan up to? He's obviously got something in that deranged head of his. I'm glad Cord is with her, and I hope that Ali will soon make her mind up to stay with Cord on the ranch. She doesn't like the city, she fits in so well in the countryside. Well, he nearly got that first kiss, but was scared of the consequences. I think she was, too. Excellent, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Sorry you had to read it with no money attached.
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No problem, I wanted to catch up before tomorrow. I only came home from holiday this morning, so it was nice to find a couple of chapters waiting. xxx
Comment from Sanku
I enjoyed the ride through NewYork city and central park and I almost drooled when I read about the ice creams. Griffin follwing fills me with unease..Cordero's self control is commendable.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed the ride through NewYork city and central park and I almost drooled when I read about the ice creams. Griffin follwing fills me with unease..Cordero's self control is commendable.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"fifth avenue" should be Fifth Avenue because that is the street's proper name.
Eating ice cream together. Their relationship is muy bueno!
Seemed Cord resented his mother's involvement in his relationship with Alexandra.
Griffin following them indicates potential trouble brewing.
Appears they are both more than apprehensive about letting their feelings for each other bloom.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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"fifth avenue" should be Fifth Avenue because that is the street's proper name.
Eating ice cream together. Their relationship is muy bueno!
Seemed Cord resented his mother's involvement in his relationship with Alexandra.
Griffin following them indicates potential trouble brewing.
Appears they are both more than apprehensive about letting their feelings for each other bloom.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I read your Fifth Avenue correction and said, "How did it get lower case?" Then I checked it sure it. I can't believe I did that and you're the only person to catch it. WOW!!!!! Thank you for the help. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is really good. They know a great deal about each other now and Cord realizes he is having a lot of problems with being the perfect gentleman. I hope he doesn't underestimate the danger Griffin can pose.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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This is really good. They know a great deal about each other now and Cord realizes he is having a lot of problems with being the perfect gentleman. I hope he doesn't underestimate the danger Griffin can pose.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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We'll see exactly how dangerous Alan can be. Thank you for this kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Very good writing and pacing. Good view of the surrounding and emotional build up of your two love interests. Nice internal dialogue from Cord at the end. Very natural and in keeping with his character.
Good work.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Very good writing and pacing. Good view of the surrounding and emotional build up of your two love interests. Nice internal dialogue from Cord at the end. Very natural and in keeping with his character.
Good work.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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I noticed you hadn't reviewed and was worried you'd finally given up on me. Thank you for the kind review. I do appreciate your reviews.
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Nope. Just behind.
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I hope it's because your busy and not anything serious.
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Just busy with work before my vacation begins Friday.
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I hope you have plans to go somewhere exotic for vacation.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Well, Alexandra and Cordero both finally admitted openly that they have strong feelings for each other, and yet they chose to back away from it. I find that sad. There's no substitute for love, and I don't think people should ever run away from that. Kate xx
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Well, Alexandra and Cordero both finally admitted openly that they have strong feelings for each other, and yet they chose to back away from it. I find that sad. There's no substitute for love, and I don't think people should ever run away from that. Kate xx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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I think they're afraid of the possible distance between them. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Fleedleflump
You do a great job of gradually raising the romantic tension until they almost kiss - it's that fun device where the reader knows what's going to happen and can anticipate events. I like that things are still full of doubt - humans are complicated, and you reflect that.
I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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You do a great job of gradually raising the romantic tension until they almost kiss - it's that fun device where the reader knows what's going to happen and can anticipate events. I like that things are still full of doubt - humans are complicated, and you reflect that.
I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the understanding and the review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This chapter speaks Alexandra and Cordero decided to ride down the world famous avenue passing Tiffany & Company, Trump Tower, cathedral through Central Park, here Ali admits how much she cares for Cord; taletelling is orderly; dialogues are realistic; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This chapter speaks Alexandra and Cordero decided to ride down the world famous avenue passing Tiffany & Company, Trump Tower, cathedral through Central Park, here Ali admits how much she cares for Cord; taletelling is orderly; dialogues are realistic; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your story is getting exciting. What will happen next? Griffin is following them wherever they go; a bad man that is a problem for them. I wonder if that bothers Alexandra that Cord carries a gun?
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Your story is getting exciting. What will happen next? Griffin is following them wherever they go; a bad man that is a problem for them. I wonder if that bothers Alexandra that Cord carries a gun?
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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I think Ali figured out Cord carrying a gun is part of who he is. He's saved her once already with the gun against a rattlesnake. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amahra
I hate repeating myself, but what else can I say but 'another great installment, Barbara. You know, sometimes I feel like Cord and Alexandra are taking things too slowly, but they've only known each other for several weeks. However, I do love your build-up to the inevitable.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I hate repeating myself, but what else can I say but 'another great installment, Barbara. You know, sometimes I feel like Cord and Alexandra are taking things too slowly, but they've only known each other for several weeks. However, I do love your build-up to the inevitable.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. More will come out about Alan and Ali's relationship, which will make a little more sense why she's taking it slowly.