I Walk Alone
Since Carol passed.49 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
This is a nice sentimental poem about your wife passing away.
Yes, when you go back to places, it brings back some thoughts but it also makes you fell good knowing you shared it with someone you love. Notice I did not put a "d" on the end of love.
Your font is nice and so are the couplets.
Good luck with your poem.
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This is a nice sentimental poem about your wife passing away.
Yes, when you go back to places, it brings back some thoughts but it also makes you fell good knowing you shared it with someone you love. Notice I did not put a "d" on the end of love.
Your font is nice and so are the couplets.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is filled with emotion, love, memories, and sadness, as it pays tribute to a lost love one. I can tell from your words how much you miss your true love. I'm sorry for your loss, but glad you have such vivid, happy memories.
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This poem is filled with emotion, love, memories, and sadness, as it pays tribute to a lost love one. I can tell from your words how much you miss your true love. I'm sorry for your loss, but glad you have such vivid, happy memories.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I rated this piece clearly a six not because of form but content which pulled on my heartstrings. I say so to let you know you are not now or ever will be alone for I recall when two sets of footsteps in the sand became one, it was because the stronger of the two carried the other home.
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I rated this piece clearly a six not because of form but content which pulled on my heartstrings. I say so to let you know you are not now or ever will be alone for I recall when two sets of footsteps in the sand became one, it was because the stronger of the two carried the other home.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from Sarah Robin
I loved this poem. I have been down this road. I could feel how much you loved her and miss her. It was very well done. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. I look forward to reading some of your other works. Sarah
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I loved this poem. I have been down this road. I could feel how much you loved her and miss her. It was very well done. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. I look forward to reading some of your other works. Sarah
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very powerful poem about life, love, lost and the simple things of life like walking with the lover of your life by your side. My wife and I try to go for a daily 5 k walk don't always make it but we do it four to five times a week hard to imagine walking by my self.
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very powerful poem about life, love, lost and the simple things of life like walking with the lover of your life by your side. My wife and I try to go for a daily 5 k walk don't always make it but we do it four to five times a week hard to imagine walking by my self.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from sunnilicious
Sorry to hear about your lost. I wish for you another love and more great memories to cherish.
Edit note: 2 stanza, 2 line - Change singing to sang because your poem is set in reflection with past tense.
Lovely work :)
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Sorry to hear about your lost. I wish for you another love and more great memories to cherish.
Edit note: 2 stanza, 2 line - Change singing to sang because your poem is set in reflection with past tense.
Lovely work :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from Michael Cassar
A very caring sensitive poem. It expresses the severe loss experienced when our partner in life moves on to better pastures. Tears alone don't fill the void the heart feels. Yet, you have shown that you can convey the loss to us, your readers, and experience softly this grief. Enjoyed reading this eloquent poem.
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A very caring sensitive poem. It expresses the severe loss experienced when our partner in life moves on to better pastures. Tears alone don't fill the void the heart feels. Yet, you have shown that you can convey the loss to us, your readers, and experience softly this grief. Enjoyed reading this eloquent poem.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were heartfelt, so sad, are descriptive and creative. I am so sorry for your loss. These words are expressed with the beauty
and details of the loss of a deep love. Thank you for the author's notes -
they go compliment these words. The artwork is perfect!
With thoughts n prayers, Maria
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The author's words were heartfelt, so sad, are descriptive and creative. I am so sorry for your loss. These words are expressed with the beauty
and details of the loss of a deep love. Thank you for the author's notes -
they go compliment these words. The artwork is perfect!
With thoughts n prayers, Maria
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from MissMerri
This poem brings tears to my eyes. I can easily imagine how much you miss your wife and how difficult it must be to go on doing the same things you used to do together. You have to be very brave and strong, I think. I like how this was written, with perfect rhymes and a melodic meter, and consequently, it reads so smoothly and flows nicely. It touched my heart, so you managed to include the emotional factor as well. Well done in every way. Thanks for sharing. MM
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This poem brings tears to my eyes. I can easily imagine how much you miss your wife and how difficult it must be to go on doing the same things you used to do together. You have to be very brave and strong, I think. I like how this was written, with perfect rhymes and a melodic meter, and consequently, it reads so smoothly and flows nicely. It touched my heart, so you managed to include the emotional factor as well. Well done in every way. Thanks for sharing. MM
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from Teri7
Willie, This is a very beautifully written poem about your walks with your wife at one time, but she has gone on. You used very good loving and descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
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Willie, This is a very beautifully written poem about your walks with your wife at one time, but she has gone on. You used very good loving and descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022