Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

Yes, I can see that many of these quotes are the result of having a conversation while under the influence.
"'Cause crack doesn't flow from Heaven. I think that's, like, wine or something."

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022

My sister is hilarious, and it's more pronounced when she's medicated.

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

Yes, this is a humorous script. The script reads well. Kelli was having some issues in this script. LOL. There's very good details in this script. Each line connecting with the next line well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022

Thanks for reading and responding

reply by in777wr# on 14-Mar-2022

You're welcome.

reply by in777wr# on 14-Mar-2022

You're very welcome. Looking forward to it.

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Ok, I know it's just me, but while I loved the exchange between you and your sister, I was not at all sure which one of you was on the painkillers. Both of you sounded so hilarious. Great stuff!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022

My sister is a hoot. Thanks for the kind words.

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

I wish I had a sister I could swap lines with throughout our lives. You have successfully expressed the flavor of your interchanges and I am glad you wrote about them for the enjoyment of other FanStorians.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022

Thanks so much

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Good

Sorry. I was lost from the start. Maybe not if I actually was your sister, or other but from reading, I knew not where I was to go next. :)) .............................................

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022

Thanks for reading

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I feel so sorry that Kelli was on painkillers for so long, but she certainly came out with some very funny expressions! LOL. You've made a lovely script story here, and I enjoyed reading it. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022

Thank you so much!

Comment from jwsteele

Exceptional

This is good. You two are funny together. I cracked up.
You had me from the hook (if that's what it is called? )(this part)

Kelli: I looooove you, Jessi.
Jessi: I love you, too, Kel.
Kelli: You're my best friend.
Jessi: And you're mine. What brought that on?
Kelli:. . . I think I'm high.

It sounds real. Thanks for the giggle. Nice work.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022

I assure you it is real. My sister is a hoot. Thanks for the kind words.

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

This is the first script I've read on this site and I really enjoyed reading it. Well done! I wonder how long you have been writing scripts? Do you write in other genres?

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022

I don't write scripts. I just didn't know where else to put this collection of short scenes. I write short stories, nonfiction, and the occasional poem. (I must point out that I am in no way a poet, though.) Thank you for your interest and kind words!

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Yeah, I'm sure this belongs in scripts either. however, you could turn it into one quite easily by setting the scene for each one and making them into little vignettes, with setting and minimal direction.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022

Thank you for the input

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Nice script dear! This was a very sweet and cute read and I enjoyed it very much!
Thank you so much for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family this New Year!

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022

Thanks so much