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I wrote the songs

A poem..

55 total reviews 
Comment from Possummagic
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A wonderful tribute to your life as a poet, songwriter, father and husband, with Gods grace. I really enjoyed reading your poem (which could be a song) and your notes which detail how your life changed after finding the Lord. Really nicely written. PM

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Thanks so much PM for these gracious comments, and stellar review, and comments, blessings Roy
reply by Possummagic on 18-Feb-2022
    You are very welcome.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Bless you
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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You make it sound easy Roy, first the words of rhyme then the tune. That takes talent and obviouslypassed that around to your kids. What a great family share. I watched a combo of a classic ensemble and didgeridoo music this morning that was great. Have a good weekend Roy.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thanks so much Valda, for your empathetic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from rjuselius
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Indeed. It is memorable how Nelson Mandela wrote and danced to poetry with his pure opinions and forgiving nature.
Thank you for sharing!
and with hugs and kisses my friend!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thanks so much Rebekka, for your empathetic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Hannah Baham
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I love that the poem takes the reader through the artist's journey, not only of the song writing and career aspect, but also of the writer's life. The influence of poetry is twofold in this poem: it is shown in both the beauty of the language as well as telling the effects it had on the writer's life.

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 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thanks, Roy
Comment from June Sargent
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When we make changes for the better and allow ourselves to be molded by God, blessings overflow. Your family has enjoyed the love and unity that many families lack today. And musical talent is the cherry on top. thanks to a wiser man who wrote the songs...and lived his life to the beat of a higher power.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thanks June, for your excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
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Wonderful backstory Roy. It's a pleasure to learn more of your history. I knew your wrote music and lyrics but I'm not sure I knew about your family band. What a blessing you are my talented friend.

Well done
Janet

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thanks Janet, for your inspiring comments and a lovrly review, blessings Roy
Comment from Gloria ....
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A wonderful testimony and history here, Roy. I liked your development of the creative musical process, with so much of it being purely organic.

Your Man on a Mission review sounds like a show that never should've been missed.

Terrific and many thanks for sharing. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thanks Gloria, for your excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thanks Raul, for your excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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What a beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. What an amazing story. You overcame so much. You are so talented in your poetry and also write songs. You've done great things. I love guitar as well my sons gave me one four years ago I wanted to learn I can get the chords but can't strum right. Threw it down again. But I am going to pick it up again. All the best Roy. I enjoy your poems.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thanks Joanne, for your excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I enjoyed reading your rhythmic poem about writing music. I can relate to part of your musical story since I was from a musical family. My 2 sisters and I performed concerts at various churches. We had a pianist who accompanied us. I also became a church musician. I enjoyed the poem AND your notes detailing the history of your musical family. You have been mightily blessed.

(BTW, at the end of your poem you dated it 7/01/2022. Did you mean 2/01/2022)?

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    No, America is the only country that puts the month first, ours is day/month/year. Thanks so much, for your excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy