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A memorial to a brother writer

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Comment from Ronni
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Dear Roy,
I had made myself a note to come back and review this tribute for
August, in meantime, began to write on of my own to include, which
has been posted and submitted for chapter in tribute book..as of 9/27.
Thank you for this truly spirtually encompssing, engrossing trubute
for August. He indeed was a multi dimensional man, and always
a totally dedicated to doing good for others, whether it be his job,
family, community and local church. There was hardly a good deed
done, helping hand, kind smile and endless generosity that did not
have a sigh or gratitude tracing back to him, always quietly, unceremoniously, and on to the next deed or dutiful sharing.
Hs poetry reflected the sad, destructive side of the real world, in images and such sharp visual vibrancy and cutting edge emotions
erupting in desparaging behaviors and mean intent whether it
be in relationships, society, and all else evil in between. A unique
talent on FS that will be dearly missed.
His spiritual quests in poetry read almost like gospels. He always
had a simple sense of who he was, why he was here, and where
he was going, with total conviction and connection to his deep
Christian Faith.
Thanks for sharing this marvel and masterpiece memoir and
treasure. God bless.
Love, blessings always, Ronni







 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Thanks so much Ronni, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I have read a few of the tributes to August, Roy and yours is beautifully done, too. I read one of his poems this morning, written with a lot of emotion, as all the lovely tributes have said.
valda

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Thanks Valda, Yes August started "Carpenters for Christ", building orphanages places of worship, all with the money of volunteers, thanks for these super comments, blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Sorry, I have been out of town so have a lot of messages to catch up on. This is a beautiful tribute to a fellow poet. So sorry to see another one pass on, seems like there have been a lot in recent months.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Thanks again Anne, for your excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by Anne Johnston on 18-Sep-2021
    You are welcome
Comment from pookietoo
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A lovely tribute to August. Keep smiling and sharing your feelings with us. Best wishes to you. Good luck to you in the contest you enter. Thanks again.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Thanks for your excellent comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by pookietoo on 18-Sep-2021
    You are welcome.
reply by pookietoo on 18-Sep-2021
    No problem
reply by pookietoo on 18-Sep-2021
    no problem.
reply by pookietoo on 18-Sep-2021
    sure
Comment from karenina
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I did not k ow him, but I mourn his loss ...

I have read his last poem posted and it is moving and emotional and real.

Bless you for paying tribute to him in this way. My heart goes out to his daughter...

May his spirit rest peacefully in the arms of the Lord!

Karenina

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thanks dear Karen for these compassionate and empathetic comments, thanks for caring. Blessings Roy
reply by karenina on 16-Sep-2021
    Oh Roy--what a blessed poem you wrote for August! I was so moved by his work. Wish I could have told him that while he was among us. I'm certain he knows now...Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    You?re a blessing Karen, how are you going?
reply by karenina on 17-Sep-2021
    Slow and steady. Awaiting another surgery. God's got this!

    Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    I?ve got your back, and God
reply by karenina on 17-Sep-2021
    Appreciate that!

    Thanks!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Bless you, must frustrating, August started off ?Carpenters for Christ? look it up.
reply by karenina on 17-Sep-2021
    I just did! What an amazing thing!
    He began it? Wow...

    I have always said: FAITH IS A VERB!

    Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    Very much so, yep, if we?re not doin? it, it?s not faith,
Comment from pharp
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Roy,

This is a fine tribute to one of our very own.

You did an outstanding job in this tribute to August. Unfortunately, I did not have the pleasure of knowing this young man, but I can tell from your very uplifting poem that he was a Godly man and gentleman. My prayers and deepest sympathy are with his family during this difficult time. May God continue to comfort and keep them in His loving care.
God bless you!

Portia

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    He started "Carpenters for Christ", (same job as Jesus) and sunk his own money into helping others. You can still write one with that in mind, I would appreciate it so much Portia, and so would his beloved fellowship. Bless you for your generosity dear heart. Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your tribute reads well, Roy. I enjoyed reading it, though the reason is poignant. Your words are well thought out and create great imagery. There's good flow, good rhymes, and a great message of faith.
Thank you for haring. I enjoyed the notes, too.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks Jan for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from joycetreasures
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Hello Roy,
This is a beautiful tribute to your friend. Only God knows the time when we reach that shore for the last time. Your friend sounds like a beautiful saint. We need more of them in the world today. I loved that he was a Godly man, like you Roy!! Yes, there are many Lands beyond the Seas. This is a beautiful Poem. I pray all is well with you and your family. Well done, my friend on this poem. Fondly Joyce

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks Joyce, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by joycetreasures on 15-Sep-2021
    You are so welcome.
Comment from judiverse
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I hadn't followed August but am sorry to hear of his passing. I'm glad you noted that he as working at the Pentagon at the time of the attacks. I've heard that several on the scene have been suffering disabilities since then.
Your lines are beautiful, The tone is uplifting, as you look to the prospect of meeting August in Heaven. Excellent rhyme. judi

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks Judy, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by judiverse on 15-Sep-2021
    You're welcome. I regret that I didn't know him, but it's hard to keep track of so many people on the site. judi
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    That?s true, He liked my work, he was a sometimes enthusiast, but he was a worker for Christ, he started ?carpenters for Christ? doing good for others, sinking his own money into the work, a good man.
Comment from Gloria ....
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And very generous of your to start a tribute book for August. I always found in him a kind, gentle and generous man.

I too will be contributing a chapter to your book.

A fine poem that August would truly enjoy. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thanks Gloria, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy