Wilderness Redemption Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "The First Cut is the Deepest II"Shenanigans on the frontier
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Comment from jwsteele
Wow. Awesome write. The language you use and the vernacular bring this story to life.
This western genre is so interesting to work with. The slang they used, the way they expressed ideas, their perspective on life and it's challenges. The names of your characters are unique.
I learned from this.
Thanks
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Wow. Awesome write. The language you use and the vernacular bring this story to life.
This western genre is so interesting to work with. The slang they used, the way they expressed ideas, their perspective on life and it's challenges. The names of your characters are unique.
I learned from this.
Thanks
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Comment from poetwatch
Seems like Doo is in a whole mess of do-do., Earl. :) This is a good story you got going, Earl, I like to read the whole book, but I take the bait you hand out as you go fishing. I must say Roseaana know where to hit to make a mangy mutt yell. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Seems like Doo is in a whole mess of do-do., Earl. :) This is a good story you got going, Earl, I like to read the whole book, but I take the bait you hand out as you go fishing. I must say Roseaana know where to hit to make a mangy mutt yell. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
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Comment from royowen
Things look pretty grim for our normal party of Doo, the girls and company. It's been a while Earl, not sure I remember terribly much about the story, but I know Smythe is English, and was running guns to the Shawnee. And the two creeps spying on the girls, one getting his hand cut off. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : She (have) him a quick squeeze. Gave?
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Things look pretty grim for our normal party of Doo, the girls and company. It's been a while Earl, not sure I remember terribly much about the story, but I know Smythe is English, and was running guns to the Shawnee. And the two creeps spying on the girls, one getting his hand cut off. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : She (have) him a quick squeeze. Gave?
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! Hoping that Mighty Beaver isn't too far and is watching all this. Hope there'll be a rescue party for Doo and the ladies heading out soon.
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Smyrthe thought
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Oh no! Hoping that Mighty Beaver isn't too far and is watching all this. Hope there'll be a rescue party for Doo and the ladies heading out soon.
On typo:
Smyrthe thought
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
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Comment from Ben Colder
Sounds like a rough bunch. The gals seemed rougher. A good kick in the family jewels is always a bender. Long but interesting. It reminds me of a trapper's rendezvous.
Good one, Earl.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Sounds like a rough bunch. The gals seemed rougher. A good kick in the family jewels is always a bender. Long but interesting. It reminds me of a trapper's rendezvous.
Good one, Earl.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
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Comment from aryr
Now this was indeed a good continuation chapter, Earl. It included a great catch up for the recent events. With Clancy and Richard on a wild goose chase for hunting, Smythe betrays Doo and the two ladies. This was an interesting chapter as it included betrayal, anger and frustration. Very well done and enjoyed.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Now this was indeed a good continuation chapter, Earl. It included a great catch up for the recent events. With Clancy and Richard on a wild goose chase for hunting, Smythe betrays Doo and the two ladies. This was an interesting chapter as it included betrayal, anger and frustration. Very well done and enjoyed.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
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That's okay Earl, you are so welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Earl,
Oh, shoot. What on earth have you gone and done now!?? Looks like that's the end of any kind of peaceful moments we've been sorta enjoying. Ugh. Heerrre we go! hahahaha
Thanks!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Earl,
Oh, shoot. What on earth have you gone and done now!?? Looks like that's the end of any kind of peaceful moments we've been sorta enjoying. Ugh. Heerrre we go! hahahaha
Thanks!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Doo, Roseanna and Janie are in deep now, but I have faith they will rise above it all and come out smelling of roses. Roseanna got her two cents in with a swift kick to the groin of Smythe. Just his name makes you dislike him. LOL Good job. Nancy:)
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Doo, Roseanna and Janie are in deep now, but I have faith they will rise above it all and come out smelling of roses. Roseanna got her two cents in with a swift kick to the groin of Smythe. Just his name makes you dislike him. LOL Good job. Nancy:)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
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Comment from Ric Myworld
A lifelong fan of all the western-type books and movies, I miss all the Clint Eastwood, John Wayne, and other characters they created. Thanks for sharing and taking me back to those times. Wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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A lifelong fan of all the western-type books and movies, I miss all the Clint Eastwood, John Wayne, and other characters they created. Thanks for sharing and taking me back to those times. Wish I had a six.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
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Glad to see you back and I look forward to reading more of your fine posts.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm wondering how Doo and Roseanne gets out of being given to the Indians. Smythe gets spit in his face by Doo and the Roseanne spits on him and kicks him in the crotch. This would be funny, but it seems like the Carters are in a serious situation. I look forward to more.
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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I'm wondering how Doo and Roseanne gets out of being given to the Indians. Smythe gets spit in his face by Doo and the Roseanne spits on him and kicks him in the crotch. This would be funny, but it seems like the Carters are in a serious situation. I look forward to more.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
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