Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Football Chapter 7 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Seemed Gabriel came to realize the pitfalls of stardom and was a work in progress to turn himself around.
"She walked up stairs" should be She walked upstairs.
Dogs can definately alert when something is out of the ordinary.
Seemed Kate and Hudson are starting to become very familiar with each other.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Seemed Gabriel came to realize the pitfalls of stardom and was a work in progress to turn himself around.
"She walked up stairs" should be She walked upstairs.
Dogs can definately alert when something is out of the ordinary.
Seemed Kate and Hudson are starting to become very familiar with each other.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing this kind review. I am so excited that you went back to read a post that has no money attached.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
So glad that Katherine has friends to help her each day. It's a good thing when she jogs in the morning she has a companion with her, too. She is a very brave lady. Running in the dark is questionable.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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So glad that Katherine has friends to help her each day. It's a good thing when she jogs in the morning she has a companion with her, too. She is a very brave lady. Running in the dark is questionable.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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You're wonderful.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is a nice photo, Barbara.
-I almost called you Katherine!
-Effective use of descriptive detail.
-I like how you weave the dogs'
awareness and concern throughout the story.
-Obviously, something is going on.
-If I remember right, I think dogs were
give samples of clothing to try and
find Mr. Frost, but it was probably the
police dogs, but it does make me
think about this situation, too.
-The rapport between Katherine
and Gabe is getting better, and
I like Sarah's character, too.
-Have a wonderful holiday!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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-It is a nice photo, Barbara.
-I almost called you Katherine!
-Effective use of descriptive detail.
-I like how you weave the dogs'
awareness and concern throughout the story.
-Obviously, something is going on.
-If I remember right, I think dogs were
give samples of clothing to try and
find Mr. Frost, but it was probably the
police dogs, but it does make me
think about this situation, too.
-The rapport between Katherine
and Gabe is getting better, and
I like Sarah's character, too.
-Have a wonderful holiday!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sanku
Both the dogs sensed that something was wrong.So there is something that is not exactly right. Good dialogues and smooth flow. I enjoy your style very much.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Both the dogs sensed that something was wrong.So there is something that is not exactly right. Good dialogues and smooth flow. I enjoy your style very much.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
What would be a pleasant morning has a sinister hint to it. You raise the tension with the dogs growling at intervals throughout the morning. Excellent dialogue to reveal your characters.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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What would be a pleasant morning has a sinister hint to it. You raise the tension with the dogs growling at intervals throughout the morning. Excellent dialogue to reveal your characters.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This was another good read. It kept me interested from beginning to end. The mystery you added, keeps me wanting to read the next segment. Use of space is always great.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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This was another good read. It kept me interested from beginning to end. The mystery you added, keeps me wanting to read the next segment. Use of space is always great.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
It's interesting to have Katherine's mom helping out. She needs it. You really show how difficult it is for a single mom to work out all the details of a job and taking care of the children. The dogs are acting as if something is up. Does that mean more difficulty for Katherine? With a trickster lawyer, a guy could probably get out of jail. Katherine has had a lot to deal with, and she hasn't actually started teaching yet. If she ends up coaching the girls' cross country team, that'll be an added challenge. I would like to see Katherine with a romantic interest other than Coach. He needs to look outside the school too. It would provide a new angle. Great characterization. judi
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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It's interesting to have Katherine's mom helping out. She needs it. You really show how difficult it is for a single mom to work out all the details of a job and taking care of the children. The dogs are acting as if something is up. Does that mean more difficulty for Katherine? With a trickster lawyer, a guy could probably get out of jail. Katherine has had a lot to deal with, and she hasn't actually started teaching yet. If she ends up coaching the girls' cross country team, that'll be an added challenge. I would like to see Katherine with a romantic interest other than Coach. He needs to look outside the school too. It would provide a new angle. Great characterization. judi
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There is danger out there, and Daisy knows it. The danger stayed after Coach left, so it seems it's target is Katherine. Is it Frost? Or a relative of his? Something is going on, and that's besides what slowing going on between the Katherine and Gabrial. Hmm. Romance in the air?? Another excellent part, my friend. Well done. Have a wonderful Christmas, and let's pray for a better 2021. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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There is danger out there, and Daisy knows it. The danger stayed after Coach left, so it seems it's target is Katherine. Is it Frost? Or a relative of his? Something is going on, and that's besides what slowing going on between the Katherine and Gabrial. Hmm. Romance in the air?? Another excellent part, my friend. Well done. Have a wonderful Christmas, and let's pray for a better 2021. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a wonderful story to follow. Those dogs growling even has me concerned. Dogs can be very protective. They sense something...
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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This is a wonderful story to follow. Those dogs growling even has me concerned. Dogs can be very protective. They sense something...
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Those dogs' reaction has me concerned. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
I am enjoying this novel. The characters seem real and the dialogue unforced. There is always enough to keep us wondering (here, why are the dogs growling and on edge?) Looking forward to the next.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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I am enjoying this novel. The characters seem real and the dialogue unforced. There is always enough to keep us wondering (here, why are the dogs growling and on edge?) Looking forward to the next.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.