Football - A Novel
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I really believe that sports are good for boys and girls. It gives them a chance to prove themselves. But I also believe that education is a great factor in school. After you graduate must continue your education skills; not always are there sports to continue on with......
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I really believe that sports are good for boys and girls. It gives them a chance to prove themselves. But I also believe that education is a great factor in school. After you graduate must continue your education skills; not always are there sports to continue on with......
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from eliz100
This was a good read as usual. You moved the story along. Keeping the mystery of who sliced the tires for further discovery. I continue to appreciate your use of space.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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This was a good read as usual. You moved the story along. Keeping the mystery of who sliced the tires for further discovery. I continue to appreciate your use of space.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm sorry you had to read it with no money attached.
Comment from AJ McCall
Aww, this was a sweet chapter. I'm so happy Katherine FINALLy realizes that he actually cares and he does have a soft side. Jordon raised an interesting conversation early in the chapter and I think Gabriel's re-directing his focus on you know who, lol. When will we get a nice descriptive of this Gabriel? I don't know. I hope soon. I love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Aww, this was a sweet chapter. I'm so happy Katherine FINALLy realizes that he actually cares and he does have a soft side. Jordon raised an interesting conversation early in the chapter and I think Gabriel's re-directing his focus on you know who, lol. When will we get a nice descriptive of this Gabriel? I don't know. I hope soon. I love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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I am wondering if it isn't best to leave Gabriel's description to the imagine of the female reader. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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LOL, right. You're welcome!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good chapter, and
the spaghetti looks really good, Barb.
-I like the casual nature of this,
as Gabriel interacts with Jordan.
-The scene at dinner was very
pleasant and everyone was relaxed.
-I am guessing this might have come
from some of your own experiences.
-Gabriel is very helpful, and also
shares some of his background
with Katherine, and I think she
appreciates that, too.
-Well done. Have a good holiday season.
-I don't know if I am posting
over the holidays, either.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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-A good chapter, and
the spaghetti looks really good, Barb.
-I like the casual nature of this,
as Gabriel interacts with Jordan.
-The scene at dinner was very
pleasant and everyone was relaxed.
-I am guessing this might have come
from some of your own experiences.
-Gabriel is very helpful, and also
shares some of his background
with Katherine, and I think she
appreciates that, too.
-Well done. Have a good holiday season.
-I don't know if I am posting
over the holidays, either.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Masterful narration and superb dialog bring the delightful characters to life. The personalities shine through--touching moments and gentle humor.
Typo: She held and {AN] extra plate in her hand.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Masterful narration and superb dialog bring the delightful characters to life. The personalities shine through--touching moments and gentle humor.
Typo: She held and {AN] extra plate in her hand.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the catch. I made the correction.
Comment from Wendy G
I find these chapters both very readable and interesting. I look forward to finding out more. The characters seem authentic. Thanks for writing and sharing your work.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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I find these chapters both very readable and interesting. I look forward to finding out more. The characters seem authentic. Thanks for writing and sharing your work.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Coach is warming up to her, and slowly is getting closer to the family. I have a good feeling about thisð???thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Coach is warming up to her, and slowly is getting closer to the family. I have a good feeling about thisð???thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ric Myworld
This is one of those feel good chapters that give us just a glimpse into the boy with a crush, and the girls second thoughts all moving them closer together. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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This is one of those feel good chapters that give us just a glimpse into the boy with a crush, and the girls second thoughts all moving them closer together. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RetroStarfish
This is the chapter of this book that I've read and I was able to get into it easily. You've done a good job of moving the story forward using mostly dialogue.
This sentence made me feel like I was in the room with the characters:
"The massive dog lumbered over and plopped down. 'Thud.' "
Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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This is the chapter of this book that I've read and I was able to get into it easily. You've done a good job of moving the story forward using mostly dialogue.
This sentence made me feel like I was in the room with the characters:
"The massive dog lumbered over and plopped down. 'Thud.' "
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
Gabriel is certainly helpful and pretty handy to have around. If this keeps up, Katherine may have to keep him. They seem to fit together well, and it doesn't hurt that the boys like the coach.
You show us a softer side to the characters and let us get to know them better in this chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Gabriel is certainly helpful and pretty handy to have around. If this keeps up, Katherine may have to keep him. They seem to fit together well, and it doesn't hurt that the boys like the coach.
You show us a softer side to the characters and let us get to know them better in this chapter.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.